|Reviews for Ride|
| sharkjumper chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
"She moaned and screamed obscenities at me, and I grunted and groaned back, loving her for that moment, loving the pleasure she was giving me with abandon. The feeling of freedom, of anonymity, of being primal, of having a wild fuck with a wild girl."
christ! this just made me cream myself! not a good thing while riding a very crowded nyc subway train though i can't help fixating on the irony: i'm getting hot and bothered during a train ride while reading this particular story! hahaha!
| sharkjumper chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
this amazingly hot story grabbed me right from the author's note: "This piece of crap is based on SMeyer's repressed libido..."! lolololol! how can it not be good? i went through all the 9 chapters yesterday and got terribly absorbed by super steamy train /inn /motorcycle lemons and window drama, i completely forgot to review. i'm on my second reading now... can't wait for c10 update!
| rmcrms5 chapter 9 . 10/3/2010
Is Edward going to be ok with her finding the computers and everything? She still doesn't know exactly what he's up to but she has to start developing suspicions.
| kels420 chapter 9 . 10/3/2010
This fic is FUCKHAWT! I loooove this Edward. A friend rec'd this story to me...love it! Best lemons ever.
| Kelly J chapter 6 . 10/2/2010
aw i dont like how he is using bella AND alice!
| Kelly J chapter 3 . 10/2/2010
guh i love motorcycles!
| Kelly J chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
holy fucking hottness!
| ooza chapter 8 . 10/2/2010
Adam? I seriously have the little blockbuster envelope next to my TV right now!
I love your Jasper; he is awesome. And Edward is just... great. unf. Calling Bella while he's wacking off? LOLLLLLL
| Godschildtweety chapter 9 . 10/2/2010
That was hot
| fanfictionfeedn-the-addiction chapter 9 . 10/2/2010
daaammmmmmn I read all the chapters till now in one shot! oh god my eyes and arousal cant take anymore anyway..
| m0nt chapter 9 . 10/2/2010
so f-ing hot!
| x123 chapter 7 . 10/2/2010
I saw a teaser for this story on The Ficionators and I am glad I did, since this story is really interesting and intriguing. Oh, and hot. Really hot.
So, canon Edward wrote Bella a song because he loves her and this Edward wrote her a song because he loves fucking her. I like how you use canon elements and use them in a completely different way.
I am looking forward to following this story
| ooza chapter 5 . 10/2/2010
He's married? I love it! It's great how he's still the bad guy, and not trying to be the reformed ex-con.
| ooza chapter 3 . 10/2/2010
What a great Edward! I love it. And his reputation precedes him...
Alice and Edward as double cousins, that's definitely a first for me.
I vote yes for the ride!
| ooza chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
OMG! They are both going to Forks, how awesome is that. Prison... how great is that?