Reviews for Ride
sharkjumper chapter 4 . 10/4/2010
"Get on the bike, sweetheart. Now."

can you blame her? i know i'd be on the harley before he's finished saying "sweetheart". btw, i'd love to hear why he calls her this particular term of endearment. i think there should be a reason, something cheesy and gooey and super delicious...

as for the motorcycle ride, i want to nominate the jack off as the most daring, hottest and craziest stunt during a sexual act in the twific universe. what sites / blogs can you point me to?

xo
sharkjumper chapter 6 . 10/4/2010
you're right, american cars totally suck!

i'm flabbergasted ed is on his fast track back to jail and wonder if he's been doing any growing, or thinking for that matter, in the last 8 years. i completely understand that he's unapologetic about his crimes and that he can't wait to jump right back in. he mentions: "What I wouldn't do to have that kind of machine under me, speeding over the highway, preferably with a dozen police cars on my tail. That time would come again, I'd make sure of it."

but he also shows us a side of the man that outgrew the adrenaline junkie teenager in the subtle details: how much time it took him (much longer than it used to /than he expected) trying to put the team back together; how he doesn't drink much whiskey because he hasn't had access to hard liquor while locked up and his alcohol tolerance is low, etc...

i know i'm getting ahead of myself, but i can't help wondering if bella can reform him... or at least if their wild sex life can refocus his passions.
LinLyn chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
I cannot wait to see where this story will lead!

I think this is the hottest Edward & Bella I have encountered.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
ajs99 chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
am loving this story xxx
Riani chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
Holllllyyyyyyy sshhiiiiiiiitt that was sexy! 2nd chapter in & I'm already hooked. *kisses your feet* thankyou, thankyou, thankyou, thank you..
sharkjumper chapter 5 . 10/3/2010
oh maaaan, i think this is the crux of the story:

"I was going to get burned, I knew that. Isabella Swan had a bad side but she was inherently a good girl. Was she going to be worth the price? Would she survive after I'd done with her? Would I?"

i have a feeling this means that ed is eventually gonna get caught and since bella won't be able to live without him she's gonna wait for him to get out of jail. meanwhile they're gonna have crazy hot monkey sex during conjugal visits... or she could turn super thief... no, maybe not.
barburella chapter 9 . 10/3/2010
OMG, are you for real? Damn, woman. I'm exhausted just reading it. LOL.
barburella chapter 8 . 10/3/2010
I love Hugh Dancy. Well, until he married Claire Danes I loved him.

Anyhoo... the phone tricks he's playing on Bella are not nice. Not fair to leave her frustrated like that.

The fact that you took 90% of SM's characters and turned them into high society crooks? EPIC!
barburella chapter 7 . 10/3/2010
LOL, they'll probably stay away from each other about 3-5 paragraphs.
barburella chapter 6 . 10/3/2010
I'm not going to guess what the surprise is. I suck at guessing. But I'm glad Jazz is going to meet Alice.

The missile launcher comment made me laugh.
ksuvoge chapter 9 . 10/3/2010
Holly shit...hot story!

Jasper prob. Heard a good show! :)
barburella chapter 5 . 10/3/2010
Hehe, I love the point in the story where Edward realizes he's hooked. Squeee.

I hope you're not planning a lot of angst in this.
Mari94 chapter 9 . 10/3/2010
My goodness, talk about stamina - these two! :-) Can't wait to see what's up next! Thanks for the update!
barburella chapter 4 . 10/3/2010
Boy, when that mofo wants something he gets it, huh?

That chopper lemon was hawt. *running to change panties, brb*
barburella chapter 3 . 10/3/2010
Holy shit, this thing DOES have a plot. Bahahaha.

JSYK, I'm really enjoying it so far. I have a feeling I'm going to keep enjoying it. BTW, you really don't have to feel obligated to respond to my reviews... in some of them I just ramble like an idiot. Feel free to ignore.
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