|Reviews for Ride|
| dihenydd chapter 10 . 10/5/2010
Every time a chapter finishes I want to know what is coming next. Not just for the hotness but the master criminal plot.
Edward is starting to understand that during his 8 years away things have changes and the thrill seeking privileged youngsters of then are turning into family people with responsibilities. will he be forced to change his team of acolytes or start to tone down his operations?
I loved the interaction with Carmen, so much was conveyed in that little exchange.
The chemistry between Edward and Bella is so strong it sizzles but they are also worlds apart in many ways. Will one or both of them have to compromise or will they live in denial until this affair burns itself out? Or indeed will it all go up in the flames of a self destructive inferno?
| Riani chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
I've lost count to how many orgasms that is.. LoL! Still owning me! Can't wait for an update! :)
| larin20 chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
Damn...just damn. Wow...speechless...more please.
| SagaDevotee chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
*pant pant* oh good lord. that is some lemon filled goodness...er, badness...er...i likey a lot!
| sharkjumper chapter 8 . 10/4/2010
ok, so i'm on my second read and it finally occurred to me: is eddie thinking of recruiting alice? no fucking way! and did i get this right: alice is 16 and jasper is 24, yes?
| sharkjumper chapter 7 . 10/4/2010
"I did start the entire affair, after all. If I hadn't been so fucking horny that day on the train, I wouldn't have seduced Edward Cullen. He never would have met me outside Forks' shiny shindigs. My life would have gone on like it had been before: dry, safe, and boring."
isn't it so very interesting how they're both trying to escape their lives?
| sharkjumper chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
"I knew then that if I hadn't met her on the train, I would've met her somewhere at some point and I would've hounded her ass. It would've just taken us a little longer but we'd end up where we were – tangled in my sheets, on my couch, with my cock deep inside her" ...pass me some ice water, stat! hot hot hot!
btw, "no more wanking like a deranged monkey" doesn't sound right on this side of the atlantic. there are quite a few britishisms scattered throughout this fic and whoever is proofreading it should keep an eye on translating the idioms so that eddie has a more believable tone of voice since he's supposed to be an american. over here masturbation is most commonly referred to as jerking or jacking off...
i have no idea what could top the lemon flavored delirium from this chapter... they made 3rd base on the train, perhaps go for a home run ;)?
| sharkjumper chapter 4 . 10/4/2010
"Get on the bike, sweetheart. Now."
can you blame her? i know i'd be on the harley before he's finished saying "sweetheart". btw, i'd love to hear why he calls her this particular term of endearment. i think there should be a reason, something cheesy and gooey and super delicious...
as for the motorcycle ride, i want to nominate the jack off as the most daring, hottest and craziest stunt during a sexual act in the twific universe. what sites / blogs can you point me to?
| sharkjumper chapter 6 . 10/4/2010
you're right, american cars totally suck!
i'm flabbergasted ed is on his fast track back to jail and wonder if he's been doing any growing, or thinking for that matter, in the last 8 years. i completely understand that he's unapologetic about his crimes and that he can't wait to jump right back in. he mentions: "What I wouldn't do to have that kind of machine under me, speeding over the highway, preferably with a dozen police cars on my tail. That time would come again, I'd make sure of it."
but he also shows us a side of the man that outgrew the adrenaline junkie teenager in the subtle details: how much time it took him (much longer than it used to /than he expected) trying to put the team back together; how he doesn't drink much whiskey because he hasn't had access to hard liquor while locked up and his alcohol tolerance is low, etc...
i know i'm getting ahead of myself, but i can't help wondering if bella can reform him... or at least if their wild sex life can refocus his passions.
| LinLyn chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
I cannot wait to see where this story will lead!
I think this is the hottest Edward & Bella I have encountered.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
| ajs99 chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
am loving this story xxx
| Riani chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
Holllllyyyyyyy sshhiiiiiiiitt that was sexy! 2nd chapter in & I'm already hooked. *kisses your feet* thankyou, thankyou, thankyou, thank you..
| sharkjumper chapter 5 . 10/3/2010
oh maaaan, i think this is the crux of the story:
"I was going to get burned, I knew that. Isabella Swan had a bad side but she was inherently a good girl. Was she going to be worth the price? Would she survive after I'd done with her? Would I?"
i have a feeling this means that ed is eventually gonna get caught and since bella won't be able to live without him she's gonna wait for him to get out of jail. meanwhile they're gonna have crazy hot monkey sex during conjugal visits... or she could turn super thief... no, maybe not.
| barburella chapter 9 . 10/3/2010
OMG, are you for real? Damn, woman. I'm exhausted just reading it. LOL.
| barburella chapter 8 . 10/3/2010
I love Hugh Dancy. Well, until he married Claire Danes I loved him.
Anyhoo... the phone tricks he's playing on Bella are not nice. Not fair to leave her frustrated like that.
The fact that you took 90% of SM's characters and turned them into high society crooks? EPIC!