Reviews for Ride
Evie has left the building chapter 6 . 9/3/2010
Take a wild guess what Edward's surprise is!

To fuck in a rich, person's expensive car?
Neliz chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Wow! I'm sorta speechless at the moment, so I'll get back at ya on the next one
Evie has left the building chapter 2 . 9/3/2010
wow- you have the hot trifecta...tattward, big-cockward and jailward. hubba hubba

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rmcrms5 chapter 6 . 9/3/2010
I found your story on twcs and was thrilled to see a few more chapters here.
Evie has left the building chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Ok- first of all, and maybe you will know with your vast knowledge of Japanese train porn...why do they blur everything out? It seems like pointless porn if you can't see the goods...

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" got off in King St. Station in Seattle" literally!

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and her outfit- priceless!

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and yes...hot an bothered...
MarilagML chapter 6 . 9/3/2010
Puwedeng inominate sa Indie Twific?
siggynic chapter 6 . 9/2/2010
Good chapter! You know, I was thinking about your story the other day and I really like your Bella - she's strong and smart and knew what she wanted. Awesome. I hope she gives him hell.
YellowGlue chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
THIS: Maybe it was a wait, or "easy," or a string of nice, colorful curses. I didn't care.

I love this feeling.

still so sexy and I'm moving eagerly to chapter six!
imsonotdoingthis chapter 6 . 9/1/2010
I really like this story, the smexin' is hot, but now the plot seems really interesting too. I'm looking forward to reading more!

I got the initial link from a camper on . Great advertiser! lol
YellowGlue chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
holy shit!

I want to know why the fuck THIS wasn't nommed for a golden lemon award?

Um, probably because it's better than golden. This is like... PLATINUM pornography :)

I love his inner monologue - his asides are funny, and when he refers to her as an "impatient little bitch", I swoon. Yeah, I said it, I love that shit - take my womanhood card away if need be, I'll own up to this fact. His dirty thoughts are HOT :)

so, in truth: another chapter tonight might kill me dead! I will DEFINItELy be continuing though!

So, I'm taking this one to bed with me, and I'm going to reread it :)

heaps of juicy hearts,
YellowGlue chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Had this recc'd to me by a friend ;)

fuckinghell girl! How am I EVER supposed to sleep again, let alone right now? That was so delicious!

This: And damn if his voice didn't make my pussy drip. Damn if his stubble, hard and prickly, didn't make me shiver.

Was beautiful and sexy at the same time. Not easy to achieve - especially inbetween so much drippy erotica, but it was PERFECTLY written and PERFECTLY placed!

That and this: trying to work it as deep as it would go, trying to touch everything inside me...

motherfuckingthud.

glad to move on to chapter two to see what happens :)

hearts,
4natelaft chapter 6 . 9/1/2010
Story is very good...interesting...poor bella is gonna get her heart broken
beckz83 chapter 6 . 9/1/2010
I have no freaking idea what this guy could be planning and the whole Bella revenge thing is weird hope he doesnt turn out to be a complete dick.
Nena1981 chapter 6 . 9/1/2010
omg..im loving this story..the scence between them are hot...keep it comming..lmao
berdb chapter 6 . 9/1/2010
I love this story and I love the Jasper "asperger" angle. My son is high functioning autistic and although extremely intelligent, he does have his obsessions and can talk your ear off "literally". You described that very well. Not many people have the compassion and patience to listen until "they" completed talking about their current obsession.

I can see how obsessed with Alice he would become.

I am myself very curiously awaiting the first time my son gets an interest in a girl. I think she would become his new "obsession" much like his current obsessions with techno gagets.

He is extremely good looking (if you have noticed, most boys on the autistic spectrum have attractive facial features - I don't know why but it is what I have noticed, their eyes especially) & at 14 years old, the girls do gawk at him, but he is oblivious, and it is quite funny at times.

Can't wait to read more.
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