Reviews for The Golden Compass The Other Child
Daisy chapter 19 . 12/18/2014
I do love your story but it would be nice to see how the events of the Golden Compass have changed with Sarah as the new character. So if you want to write a second story you may wanna change the plot a bit and create another ending. It's just a suggestion but go on!
Acadjonne d'la Baie chapter 19 . 4/30/2014
Please write the Subtle Knife, I'd like to read your version of it!

Also, if you do write it, keep it in Sarah's pov.
Teddy bear 007 chapter 19 . 11/17/2012
Good story! Make sure you watch your punctuation and stuff though. You should do the subtle knife in Sarah's pov!
joy is my name chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
This is really well writen but you need to remember that mrs coulter would not let her self be domineered like that she is strong and polight and eligant and also she is EVIL she dose not help people unless she sees benifit to her self the only exception to this rule is Lyra. But don't stop writing the story is interesting so far and you have a knack for writing
WyldClaw chapter 4 . 5/16/2012
Ha! Sarah and Lyra sure scared those gyptian kids good with that 'cursed fown' story
abc14 chapter 19 . 5/15/2012
Great "northern lights" ending, tons better than the movie's one :)

Thank you for writing this story, have really enjoyed reading it!

Would love you to do "The Sutble Knife", it would so cool :D

Thanks again for this story ! :)
abc14 chapter 18 . 5/9/2012
Great chapter :)

Really enjoyed reading it!
WyldClaw chapter 2 . 4/29/2012
Wow! Poor Ariana . That must have taken all her remaining courage and strength to fly to Marisa and give her baby sarah
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Wow! What a great first chapter
abc14 chapter 17 . 4/25/2012
Cool story !

Thanks for updating :)
Secrets-0f-dreams chapter 16 . 12/9/2011
i love this story please update soon
Grievousorvenom chapter 16 . 12/4/2011
I really like this story please update soon _
GummyBearGunner321 chapter 13 . 10/26/2011
Very, very good chapter. Love where you're going. Cant wait to see what happens next.
abc14 chapter 13 . 9/23/2011
Cool chapter.

Update soon!

:)
GummyBearGunner321 chapter 12 . 9/19/2011
Great chapter. Update soon. :D
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