Reviews for The Secret Life of Um
Silence Navarathna chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Brilliant!
DarrenShanForeva123 chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
i have a runny nose and now i have a nose-bleed, lol

thank you XD awesome story bro d(3)b
Yanana chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
the best bit was that someone had to sit through it, lol
takara410 chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
love it babe just love it
Dreamweaver74 chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Never before have I wished my name were Um, lol! Very hot, very brilliant!
BlackMetalHeart chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
*pants, fans self, passes out:)*
Niphuria chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
This was an amazing one shot! Alice was perfect as "Um" and did wonders with Stayne, tho he is no slouch either. ;)

Love the last bit! Hilarious!
Captain Zex chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
This was an amazing and well thought out story, I love it! I think the concept of Alice creating another persona for Um was quite clever and everybody loves the Knave so there was no going wrong there! I look forward to reading more from you.

-Project Zex
duedicoppe chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
The story is exciting and well written, and I like when Stayne / Lay is consensual, and the last sentences are really hilarious! Above all, "Vulnerability, loneliness" is perfect! Are you planning a sequel?