they are not real friend real friend dont take money to be friends and to spy for old wrinkly cock no no

Holy crap! I think you are the only H.P writer I've seen who uses correct firearm terminology. I have seen the term clip thrown around so often in fanfiction that I want to scream at the author's ignorance. It is quite refreshing that you chose use the term magazine which is the correct, so a big kudos for that.

I can't say I am a big fan of the wizard revolution, if I'm being honest but I also can't deny that the planning and execution of the wizard warfare is very well done. I like the mithril suits but I am not a big fan of their wand crystals being grafted to the elite's backs. I guess you could say I am on the fence about the second act of the story. The genocide of muggles is a bit off-putting since ninety percent of them had nothing to do with the wizard's enslavement and as a muggle myself I find the idea of wizard overlords deeply unsettling lol.

Either way, this is a very interesting story and I am excited to see how it ends.

The battle with Voldemort was a bit anticlimactic but I kind of knew is was coming from what was said in the short story that came before this story. The court scenes were very satisfying as was the final scene with Snape.

Dammit! Luna was bad enough but then you go and kill off Tonks who is (or was) another one of my favorite characters. One the upside I really enjoyed Harry telling Remus what for, that almost makes up for Tonks getting the shaft... almost

What about Gibbon? Voldemort didn't mention his death?

Luna also helped put Sirius' death in perspective after the D.o.M fiasco, she wasn't a much used character but she was one of Harry's most loyal friends outside of Ron and Hermione. I can see how people would be upset that she got killed off and doing it off screen just makes it worse.

I have to say that I genuinely feel sorry for Dumbledore in this story, I am glad that you made Dumbledore a good guy who made bad choices as opposed to the grand manupulator he's often portrayed as in stories like this . A lot the problems between the headmaster and Harry are the product of poor communication on both of their parts. Not that it matters since Dumbledore's hourglass is running out anyway but poor communication has caused Harry to take drastic action that will no doubt cause Harry more problems later on in the story. All in all I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit and I'm looking forward to what comes next.

In the last few chapters I've noticed quite a few places where the text is copied almost word for word from HBP. I hope this isn't a recurring theme through the rest of the story. The memories I can understand taking directly from the books as it is no different in this story than the bookd but it gets a bit dull when so much of the main storyline is J.K.R's writing with only a slight twist from the author.

You have to appreciate Harry promising Ron he wouldn't tell Fred and George about the necklace only to put on a sweater with a snitch on it

Excellent chapter, I specifically enjoyed how Harry dealt with Mundungus. Harry's lessons with Victoria were also amusing. Finally, I love how the Malfoy subplot is playing out. The fact that this story is opposite from canon with Ron and Hermione obsessing over Malfoy instead of Harry is quite refreshing.

wow, Harry's first confrontation with Dumbles and he folds like an oragami swan. So what if Albus is the secret keeper Grimmauld Place is still covered in Black wards and there is no way he would just share the secret anyway. instead of calling his bluff Harry throws a tantrum... pathetic.

I wish the confrontation with Mundungus hadn't played out almost exactly as it did in canon, that was kind of a let down if I'm honest.

and the obscenely rich get richer

I have to disagree with your theory about the mark being invisible to those without it. In G.o.F when Dumbles is trying to convince Fudge that Voldie has returned, Snape shows everyone in the infirmary his dark mark. I suppose death eaters could choose to make their mark visible to non death eaters but it is not the death eaters who cast the spell to brand the mark on their arms so it is not their magic to manipulate. I also doubt Voldemort would give his servants the autonomy to show it to whoever they wish as it could compromise his plans in one way or another.

When you say Verity looks like Rita Skeeter do you mean the Masculine-looking Rita Skeeter as described in the novels or the very good-looking Rita Skeeter played by Miranda Richardson in the films, because there is a big difference.