Reviews for Rise of the Wizards
Guest chapter 47 . 9/13
Thanks for Diwali wishes , your story is quite unique. Hope you become a successful author.
Johnmau chapter 7 . 8/21
fucking creep.
Johnmau chapter 6 . 8/21
this chapter was fucking disgusting. to relish in this shit? fucking hell.
Just William chapter 25 . 7/27
A typo, "reign in his emotions", should be "rein in his emptions".
Just William chapter 18 . 7/25
A typo "Princess Street", should be "Princes Street".
Aertho52 chapter 51 . 7/21
I really appreciated how the story has a nice balance of highs and lows.
Aertho52 chapter 9 . 7/19
I don't generally enjoy negative portrayals of Hermione (at least when the faults are exaggerated beyond canon), but I did really enjoy the overall tone. I can't stand when Dumbledore is portrayed as a kindly old man, but stories where he's secretly an over the top villain are equally as unsatisfying. Thanks for the story!
Darknessdawns chapter 51 . 7/5
This is an absolutely phenomenal piece. It covers so much and goes in directions I didn't even anticipate. One of the things I enjoyed about this was how it detailed the events during Harry's 30 chapter flashback, before building off that and going so much further. I never expected him to become king or emperor. Hell, I definitely didn't expect Muggle royalty to be in control of the Magicals worldwide. Honestly you did an excellent job with the entire story and I truly enjoyed it from beginning to end.

I saw very few typos and there was only the occasional bout of confusion from unmarked timeskips. However some of the information dumps in the middle of dialogue led to confusion as well. I found myself having to backtrack to pick the conversation back up several times. Overall the story was very well written, I just wish the flashback of information and stuff would have happened after the dialogue or at least the part relevant to the information.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/1
Good flow
Guest chapter 9 . 7/1
Why is your harry whining about Dumbledore,he had done his best under the circumstances? Errors occur sometimes, Dumbledore is also ultimately he has the good of wizarding world at heart and wasn't selfish.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/1
Harry should forego that marriage contract
Guest chapter 8 . 7/1
Author stop this half a dozen lordships and bs marriage contracts. It is so cringy and cliche the necessity to have a marriage contract with the supposed ice queen of Slytherin. I hope the mc doesn't start pining after a person because of a pre-agreement he should be against the pureblood movement in principle atleast or your harry will feel like a spoiled 'you are beneath me' pureblood .
Guest chapter 6 . 7/1
Please don't time travel sirius, leave him dead
Juno MeNu chapter 51 . 6/17
sthrobbins assuming you didn't read the full story? You are an absolute idiot for that awful review.

This is an awesome OP Harry Potter story probably one of the best I've ever read. Amazing really.
dodger101 chapter 2 . 6/11
ok you wrote that Harry inherited a lot of money so he is rich, then why is he stealing and use imperious that take a way the will of human being add to that with also using magic to erase the memory of the seller, someonw who has done nothing to him? for what? to test his new found power? i hate that he seems to have no moral ground
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