Reviews for Finding Me
DCIPHOENIX chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
That was good. Really good. Bloom was a bit ooc - as i don't think he'd kiss her, i think it'll be the other way round- she'd kiss him!

Also *reads fanfic i 3rd time* where's the rape? Xxx
DCIPHOENIX chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
That was good. Really good. Bloom was a bit ooc - as i don't think he'd kiss her, i think it'll be the other way round- she'd kiss him!

Also *reads fanfic i 3rd time* where's the rape? Xxx
HollyBolly-x chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
aaawwwww, that was great. JARTHA 3. About time they had a Identity catagory! :)
SoLifeGoesOn chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
I love Jartha! And I agree about the clothes,I suppose they'd look nice...just on someone else? lol this is amazing x
livvyloola chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
That was brilliant! I don't think it was OOC and I think the reason you gave for Martha wearing those awful clothes is plausible too. :)

Great characterisations and I love how John realises that Martha needs help, but doesn't realise that he himself needs it.

There were also some lovely witty lines that helped to break the tension a bit, for example:

'Jesus Martha.'

'Jesus has nothing to do with it.' She smiled then, and settled back against the counter.

It made me giggle. :)

And I really liked how they came to kiss, it was so sweet! 3

So yeah, this was really great. I hope you write more! :D

xo'.
x-MJ-x chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Aww that was brilliant, loved the characterisation and the little background you gave Martha... was perfect... Loved it

Michelle xx
itbloomedforyourlittlegirl chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
NO IT IS NOT OOC IT IS BLOODY AMAZING! :D xx