Reviews for Parachute
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
That was really good :)
Lucydolly22 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Please do not abandon this story its awesome its awesome. Add another chapter
Ginnylove9990 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
I wish there was a second chapter to this just to hear John reaction when he found them and maybe having them wake up in the hospital. But other then that it is a great story.
hemillsie chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Oh my god. It's BEAUTIFUL. I love brother-fics where they show how much they really care.

5 stars :)
Emmers224 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Ohhhh my gosh. This was amazing. The brotherly angst and love was just PERFECT. What a great read. Had the right amount of suspense and fear and of course, brotherly love. It always takes my breath away, seeing big brother Dean at his finest. You captured him beautifully. :) I loved it!
SummerQuill chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
damn that made me tear up, I'm talking lip quivering and all the whole 9 yards. Seriosly loved it so sad and so cute twas amazeing.
Harikari chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Lovely story! The fact that Dean falls with him is rings so very...them. And that last line is so powerful and bittersweet considering the future that's waiting for them. Well done.
Moydra chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I adore this story. Would definitely love to see it carried into a second chapter! But, even without a resolution, love it!
lil joker 1989 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Ok you know I have to ask...did the boys survive? Great one shot by the way it was really good
marinawings chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Fantastic story! I love the way you write the brothers, how even at their young ages, the reader gets a preview of the men they're going to be. They seem so much like themselves! Excellent work with that!

I also love the suspense of the story, the way it kept me on the edge of my seat, even as the brothers were on the edge of the cliff. And the brotherly love! It warms my heart. Wonderful, wonderful brotherly love!

Great story!
Lydia chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Hi AmiNoo/Ami-Rose,

That was such an AWESOME story! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time and I guess I have to admit it;there were a few...tears!...and I don't cry often, it was just such a heart-wrenching story! You are a fantastic author!

But I BEG you...please don't leave it as a one-shot, the cliffhanger is huge...and I think it would be great...scratch that...I think it would be amazingly awesome if you continued...please continue it/or write a follow-up story...PLEASE, I am on my knees here! Haha!

Thank you for all your time.

I look forward to discovering what you decide to do with the story...and keep writing, you are ACE at it! :-)

Love from,

Lydia
LOSTrocker chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Oh. My. Chuck. *sniffles* Really, I need a tissues. You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time, and I was cursing along with Dean. This. Was. Awesome.
violetstar198 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
ohmygod *whimpers* i simultaneously hate you and love you. this was such an awsomely written, detailed, heart wrenching, tear inducing, i-need-a-tissue-right-now, fic. i seriously want to give you the biggest hug in the entire world because that's just how freakn awsom this is... but then i want to hate you like so much cause i never stopped crying throughout this entire fic!

i swear my heart stopped when they both fell. it like went 'bump- pause- pause- bump'. and i swear i want to write this awsome review for this unbelieveable story but im not sure i can *rubs neck* *wipes face with tissue* are you continueing this? please continue this! you can't end it like that! did they die? cause if they died im gonna cry all over again, and i cried way too much during the minutes i was readng this. oh and one last thing before the rambler that i sadly am leaves i just wanna say that i am gonna hug you for making this super long and i luv you for your awsome writing skills! i bow down to your awsomness! *hugz* xxxx and i shall give you cookie as a reward for being so awsome! ;D *hands over humongo cookie of you choice*
Courtnee chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
That was amazing! I was thinking 'oh my god!' through it all. :) i even teared up at some point. And its funny that im 17 and my sister is 13. So i found it extremely relateable. Which is probably wat made me tear up. Anyway i love it!
SpnBloodStar chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
This was amazing. It made me cry because I was so worried about both of them and Dean was amazing the way he kept hold of Sam. I honestly oved this story. Keep writing! x
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