|Reviews for Be a Bit More Dense|
| Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 1 . 2/3
Ha. That was interesting and I enjoyed that it was written from Timcampy's POV, especially that "Glooooom" part and Allen's reaction to that. Good job.
| Kagamiyuki chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
I'm so happy someone finally didn't ignore Tim. Great fanfic
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
Goddamnit, the Dense Duo strikes again...
| AnnekaIsAwesome chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
hmmm, wow i never would have thought to use that perspective. very imaginative, i like it.
| n00dl3gal chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Timcanpy... you nailed him very well. Adorable and in character. Good job!
| Eventideless chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Nice one-shot; the ending had me smiling a bit
| Uniasus chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Best Tim POV fic ever.
| kurosakiLenalee chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
I love the dense duo! I have never read a story from Tim's perspective but I love it! His inner thoughts make so much sense and feel his depression and annoyance. Yay! Thanks for posting.
| BornBlindtoBeauty chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Wahhhhh! That's was so cute! Like the cutest thing I have ever read! XD oh Tim! XD
| Spider's Thread chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Timcanpy is so cute in this one.
| Banana JZ chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
That was cool. xD
| ani chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
i love this! Tim's POV is so funny and Allen and Lenalee are so IC... it's so cute!
| shadowanime1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
i really liked this story.
| Miyo-chan02 chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
kyaaaah~ so ADORABLE~
Tim's our hero eh? :'3
really good xD I really love Allen, but callin him stupid master and slappin him with his tail is oh so purely entertaining x'3
I never really thought of Lenalee as dense~ more of clueless at times though lol..
definitely Dense Duo.. a great nickname x'D
| Brilliant Rose chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Aaaw, so cuuuuuuute! I loved how you made Timcanpy kind of third-person - it worked well and I wasn't confused much. They really ARE a dense duo! Well said! XD