Reviews for Be a Bit More Dense
AnnekaIsAwesome chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
hmmm, wow i never would have thought to use that perspective. very imaginative, i like it.
n00dl3gal chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Timcanpy... you nailed him very well. Adorable and in character. Good job!
Eventideless chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Nice one-shot; the ending had me smiling a bit
Uniasus chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Best Tim POV fic ever.
kurosakiLenalee chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
I love the dense duo! I have never read a story from Tim's perspective but I love it! His inner thoughts make so much sense and feel his depression and annoyance. Yay! Thanks for posting.
BornBlindtoBeauty chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Wahhhhh! That's was so cute! Like the cutest thing I have ever read! XD oh Tim! XD
Spider's Thread chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Timcanpy is so cute in this one.
Banana JZ chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
That was cool. xD
ani chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
i love this! Tim's POV is so funny and Allen and Lenalee are so IC... it's so cute!
shadowanime1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
i really liked this story.
Miyo-chan02 chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
kyaaaah~ so ADORABLE~

Tim's our hero eh? :'3

really good xD I really love Allen, but callin him stupid master and slappin him with his tail is oh so purely entertaining x'3

I never really thought of Lenalee as dense~ more of clueless at times though lol..

definitely Dense Duo.. a great nickname x'D
Brilliant Rose chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Aaaw, so cuuuuuuute! I loved how you made Timcanpy kind of third-person - it worked well and I wasn't confused much. They really ARE a dense duo! Well said! XD
animephoenix2468 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
This is so cute! You've inspired me to write a story from Tim's POV but with a different style. Is that okay0
3dumplings3 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Aw. This is just so adorable.
WynMir chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I love it! 3
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