Reviews for those times are running elsewhere
RomyNotSchneider chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
jesus fucking hell im crying
Marora18 chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
I love this. You captured the emotions beautifully. This pairing is so heartbreaking and intriguing. You did it justice.
steepedinwords chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
love, love, LOVE this.
iMissHP chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
I don't know if you know, but you won The Best Reviewer prize on the Comp! Which means: a lot of your stories reviewed!

Anyway, here is my review for this piece.

It's really beautiful and sad. I really like all the 'half' theme, and I adore that sentence: "and sometimes fred is the part that's missing, and sometimes you are."

It's so melancholic and sad ans really sounds well. The memories included in the poem are really heartbreaking, and it's true that we often thought about George, but really less about Angelina.

You did an amazing job, I loved it!
thelightningstrike chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Honestly, this was entirely beautiful. The structure of the verses, the playing around you did with italics and bolding etc, plus the fragmented, realistic thought process style of it, made for some supremely high quality reading. I really really enjoyed this and hope that you venture into freeverse again!