Reviews for The Unforgiving Minute
cHaZzi123 chapter 10 . 8/16
WOW! What an epic ride, it was like a painkiller game or the movie crank with the relentless action and deadline driving the plot forward towards the climax.

What a thrill to read! The flashbacks felt a little unnecessary but it is a common plot device.

Great Job, I read it all in one sitting, on the edge of my seat the whole time.

Funnily enough I absolutely hated Cedric at the end there, he was coward in the end :(

Congrats on finishing this amazing story.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/10
A short ride but how si wonderful.

Captivating and Heart wrenching altogether.
The end IS juste perfect, with all ends tied from thé old Harry. And fully open from young Harry, with all inhérent problems of magical World standing...

Thanks for thé read, from years in thé future...
moodysavage chapter 10 . 6/12
So dark and tragic but it ended well.
lipasnape chapter 2 . 6/6
Great start, proper point of divergence, Snape's death so unusually unplanned by Dumbledore. Great tempo. Wonderful fight and no superfluous talk. Very glad to have found this story.
CharmedArtist chapter 10 . 5/31
A very interesting and ultimately satisfying end. Thank you for sharing.
Revliledpembroke chapter 3 . 5/27
I could have very happily gone my entire life without reading a graphic description of Bella Lestrange giving someone an abortion in such a manner. Is there any particular reason you decided to fill our minds with something so fundamentally gross?
LtKettch chapter 1 . 5/21
Really good story. Your final battle was quite gruesome. Thanks for sharing your work.
csheila chapter 1 . 4/16
Okay, let’s see where it goes (after a “good start”).
csheila chapter 1 . 4/16
Fascinating start
hpmick13 chapter 7 . 3/19
Since Harry was using the appearance of Lucius Malfoy at Gringotts when he encountered Diggle and at Hogwarts he was using the appearance of a stranger, this makes no sense at all: '"By Merlin!" the diminutive man squeaked. "It's him, the wizard who broke into Gringotts!"'
Tzarista chapter 10 . 1/27
It was a very captivating story . Thank you
wiebenor chapter 10 . 12/23/2022
Story as a whole is a very good one, but the ending ended a bit too abruptly for me...yeah, everyone lives happily ever after, but usually a harry Potter book, even a fanfiction ends in the train home from school. Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with that to be frank, and this is the second or third story I've seen and in the graveyard like this but again like I say without that reaction of what happens when they get back to the school and that little bit of time between then and the train it just feels a little abruptly ended to me...

Overall I'd recommend this book, but do beware how it ends abruptly after killing moldy and portkeying back to the Triwizard maze or wherever...
Rebatrek chapter 10 . 12/1/2022
Guest chapter 10 . 11/22/2022
jaqmaq77 chapter 10 . 10/28/2022
To be honest... I read it a second time skipping all the 'future stuff...' and it is actually easier to read without the 'this is what happened to set up this'... every bit in italics can be read as 'prologue'... then the normal stuff read after - but then I did have to watch 'Witcher' twice to figure out it was laid out with the last bit first...
I enjoyed the action scenes, very well written.
Descriptions of fights is brilliant...
I did read similar a few years ago... but it just gave a prologue of 'everyone was dead'
I also remember one where Harry explained the entire world was gone, "They are all dead, Headmaster... Magicals and Muggles." "No, no. Harry my boy - My way is the only way. I'm 103-" "Professor... I was 206 when I came back, trust me, You're wrong!"
"No, my boy... I have to stop you for the greater good... "
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