Reviews for Dragon Ball Z Crossover Event! Konoha Saga!
Tiger Lover 16 SPARE ACCOUNT chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Ok. Now that I finished that last review to P-Nuts, I decided to finally give this story a go, something I've been meaning to do for a while. And my first reaction to reading this is... BWA HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Seriously, I was laughing all the way through it. The chapters not without it's mistakes, some parts felt rushed and a bit unnatural, I also don't think the Akatsuki would all be so immediately active in attacking the heroes considering the nature of their operations at the point I'm assuming this story takes place in. But it's a comical fanfiction, so logic doesn't necessarily apply. Which is why the sasori jokes worked. I find the presence of Kid and Super Buu odd since the former was reincarnated as Uub, he shouldn't even have an undead version, let alone a revived version, but again, no need for logic. Apart from some complaints, the plot's looking pretty good, I see you're diving straight into the fun parts, which is all good. The funniest parts had to be Roshi and Jiraiya's interactions, SO perfect. I wanted to write those two together in my Hero of Light story, but now I'm starting to worry you've probably done it so perfectly through this story it'll leave me with less to work with unless I want to be a shameless copycat. Oh well. Ha, Goku and the power of youth. I always wanted to see how Goku would get along with Guy and Lee, thank you so much. Vegeta seems a bit less serious in this than canon, but I'm loving his snarky remarks so far. You've got a fairly good grasp of writing for these characters so far. Man, I wish I could see Videl's reactions to Ino and Sakura swooning over Gohan. Poor guy, he's going to be in so much trouble if she ever finds out. Trunks trying to get Hinata to talk was good to see, wonder where that will go? Hinata's probably my favourite girl from Naruto, NaruHina is of course one of my alltime favourite pairings, so I hope there's some reference to that. So, things are looking pretty good so far, I'll read more in a minute. Expect another review shortly.
Anonymous chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
U have seriously underestimated Z fighters strength. One proper Kamehame and all 5 great shinobi nations can be easily levelled for eternity...
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
bervo will-ther-be other nartuo-caeroosover-dragionballzgtkai you sood make a manfunny-fain0fic sarurka-uses chrehra-on-her -her-boos-to-saupersize
dr-fan-mai-lover chapter 3 . 1/6/2011
bervo aw-damit-the z-warriors-sad-they-godbey&naertuo&fands bcsuse i want the naertuo-girls gites i leission-in-performeing-the-fasuhiondace bey-whitch avater the laest-airebander&or jeames-camrrion,s-avater hhhn
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 3 . 1/6/2011
bervo if i raigth-about-fashion -you-faigth-a-vallin if loose you can,t refasuse to faigth-angain the of fashion-is 60#manits i woder goku&faerinds-will-the-naertuo-the-fashion-dace
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
bervo whan-will-ino&sakurka-fasuse
Mirai Briefs chapter 4 . 1/3/2011
Nice...I want more!
Peter Skirata chapter 4 . 1/1/2011
Aw. it's over. XD But Avatar promises to be good. can't wait!
Mirai Briefs chapter 3 . 12/3/2010
oooh NARUKE! A combo of the Sexy Sasuke and the UBER Cute Naruto! Sounds Hot! hee heehee :D
Peter Skirata chapter 3 . 12/2/2010
Awesome update. just the right mix of funny and fighting. can't wait to see how Naruke fights. update soon!
Mirai Briefs chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
This is great! Keep going! And I just LOVE the Super PERVS! heh heh Roshi and Jiriya make a great team on "Researching" hee hee! Gimme more please!
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 2 . 10/24/2010
bervo it belive a naertuo-caeroosover-cood really-workout
Peter Skirata chapter 2 . 10/16/2010
*in Gollum sounding voice (LotR would be another good idea)* Bleach...BLEEEEEEACH...Precious. Gollum...GOLLUM! *normally* Yup. the "party" reference is from TobiGB's holiday stories, aye? XD update soonz!
Peter Skirata chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Bleach! Use Bleach!
TobiGB chapter 2 . 10/7/2010
Dude this chapter was epic looking forward to the next one.