Reviews for Abusive Denial
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Hmm, based on the date it seems that she plagiarized you; n/m.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
PLAGIARISM

"Jake… why? Why do you keep letting him do this to you?" Sam choked out, his eyes brimming with tears.

"He loves me" I mumbled, looking down. "I know he does…" my voice was shaky and nowhere near confidant.

"If he loved you then he wouldn't be doing this to you!" Sam said, raising his voice slightly.

"H-He doesn't mean to, it's not going to happen again" I stuttered

"When are you going to get that it's not going to stop?" Embry said suddenly, stepping up behind Sam.

"But it will… h-he does love me, he just… he doesn't know how to control himself." I glanced up at them through my lashes and quickly snapped them back down at the fury in their eyes. "He doesn't mean to…"

"Can't control himself?" Embry snapped disbelievingly. "What happens next time he 'can't control himself', huh? He could have killed you Jacob!"

"He's not doing anything to me," I said, obviously lying to myself, and to them. "Nothing's wrong with the two of us."

"Why do you continue putting up with all of this? Why don't you just leave him?" Sam asked roughly, pushing off the bed and wrapping his hands in his hair.

"B-But he doesn't do it on purpose… he does love me."

"Like hell he doesn't do it on purpose!" he said, stepping forward slightly. I flinched again, shrinking back slightly. "What the hell has he given you to make you want to stay with him, so badly?"

"H-He… he…" My voice trailed off. My breath sped up as they continued to break through my lies.

He loves you… he loves you…

"Please, tell me, I'm just dying to know," he said harshly.

"He loves me," I said, although this time my voice sounded like it was disbelieving of my own statement. Like it was one last attempt to convince myself it was true…

"Bullshit!" Embry snapped, almost yelling at me.

"But he does… he… h-he, he…" I lost my voice and focused on not hyperventilating. They waited quietly for me to find myself again.

"It doesn't even hurt anymore…" I managed to force out a few minutes later. "When he… when he hits me…" and with those three little words, I burst into tears, sobbing like a child.

He hits me…

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alba chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
it's good, don't really like what you did to jacob but i feel it's a statement so in that sense, it's good...
no chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
I love the song and the story
no chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
omg! this was the first edward jacob fic and it was amazing great job love thelist thing and im tall so i must look down on everybody (which is so not true!)
BrittanyChayanne chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
oh my goooood! just from this i was freaking crying! seriously i was sobbing like a baby! i have never been anywhere near abuse but you just... you make the emotions just off the page. it's increadible. please please PLEASE keep it going!
ShantelCall26 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Paul you suck. -_- awesome fanfic tho love me some Jakeward lol
KitsuneDango chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
suyuchikun chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Wow i love this and that song it was so good
Animeyaoimaster chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Sweet~
ravenanalia chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
aw make another one its cute:3 do the aftermath for this:P
bludgerno1 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
i loved it! poor jakey!
lesleytonyb chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Awww, that was so cute, poor Jacob. I loved the story, cant wait for the next chapter xxx Lesley