Haha that was cleverly written. Loved the tension and Sherlock jumping to conclusions.

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH /dies

Oh my god, so good! So hot! (Pretend that "hot" was italicised.) There wasn't anything but kissing and yet that's all it needed!

And so well-written! And written in present-tense! When will the awesomeness end?

Alright, enough of sounding like a crazed fangirl. Just, bear in mind, your story is awesome. (Ah, still fangirling.)

Absolutely brilliant!

Wow...just wow. That was intense, in character and simply perfect! Amazing. I loved how your John was near to perfect on how I've always imagined him to think and your Sherlock was as unpredictable like in the TV series. Really loved this fic!

Thought Johh was going to screw it up there. Well done.

I've read this at least twice. I love it still. I don't think I'll ever get sick of this story. Thank you for writing it. :)

Raxi

Omikhan the last line is brilliant, this is a lovely fic!

Thank you for having made sure this exists. I just really needed some very well written fluff and this was exactly that.

Don't we all just bloody know it! ;)

That was awkward and adorable and I absolutely love the last line and the face my imagination is showing her making.

TOO ADORABLE good job my dear. Johnlock is my otp. This was very beautiful.

absolutely adored it, especially the ending, Mrs Hudson's reaction 3

This story started out a little rocky for me since I don't love the degree to which John was awkward or sputtery (if that's a word?). But I LOVED how concerned John was with the age gap, very relevant, very realist, very John. And also Sherlock's reaction to John saying this was wrong was absolutely perfect and I felt like the story flowed perfectly after that moment.

After the kiss in front of Mrs. Hudson, it feels a bit rushed, but the rest of it was wonderful. I love how John stumbles through the thoughts in his head, and I like how you describe his nervous reactions. Well done.
Cheers,
Ocaso.

I knew it to, Ms. Hudson. I think we all knew it.