Reviews for Darkest Before Dawn
Guest chapter 19 . 3/9
Rial Sirus Black? I thought it was Rial Salazar Black? Oh well. Maybe it's both
LizaMa chapter 28 . 2/28
I Love your story. Especially your idea about the old death eater Group. It would be great if they would appear more often.
In the Last few chapters you refert to Rial as 16, but he is 17 already. Another point: did you Not mention that scrimgeur is now minister in the chapter where rial is Saving the newspapers for Sirius
Phillies2 chapter 24 . 2/5
I'm surprised he didn't use Morsmordre after he killed him. I am surprised how happy I am he is finally dead
Phillies2 chapter 17 . 2/5
If James and the Ministry is really being that difficult the all the Slytherins should leave for Durstrum or another school, Give Albus and the light a big FU
Phillies2 chapter 15 . 2/5
Can we just fastforward to were Rial Kills James?Please
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 43 . 2/3
very nice story, good job
Greyson chapter 38 . 1/23
I hope those two get the credit for killing Riddle and the infamous GREY ORDER
Gothic Rain chapter 8 . 1/22
Love meowGongall, I haven't seen that in any other story. It's absolutely brill. Love what he did with the snitch and FOR ONCE LEE JORDAN WASN'T BIASED!
Gothic Rain chapter 3 . 1/22
Oh so is Lily now, finally, seeming to snap into some common sense. Quiet a horrendous women she's been...
Gothic Rain chapter 1 . 1/22
I was so relieved to hear there was a sequel! And once again Dumbdore strikes again!
Guest chapter 19 . 1/21
You said here that his middle name was Sirius but previously you said it was Salazar. Which one is it?
Yoru no Katana chapter 43 . 1/9
You know a story is good when you rush to finish it in two days; I did, both Midnight Sun and Darkest Night combined.
Yoru no Katana chapter 35 . 1/9
Alecto and Amycus. Alec and Amy. Yeah I can see why you mixed up their genders XD
krixlight chapter 42 . 1/6
...I'm glad this is what it came to, but how was Rial "broken" as stated in the prophecy since the world is obviously not destroy? don't get me wrong I love this ending, but I just want to know how does it fit in. and the BWL prophecy, was that fake then?
CosmicCaiti chapter 28 . 1/5
I'm really enjoying your story but there are some plot inconsistencies. For instance,in Midnight Sun nearly all of your characters had Rownan as one of their middle names? Also in the story of Rial's conception Sirius mentions that he and Lily were 21 but later during claiming of blood Sirius' birthday is listed as only 19 years beyond Rials. One of the biggest ones however is in the chapter where Rial is sitting at Sirius' hospital bedside it there is several headlines that state that Fudge has removed as Minister yet in this chapter they discuss how to remove him. All that being said, I'm loving the plot, and all the characters seem true to themselves. Thanks for your creativity
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