Reviews for Darkest Before Dawn
Ampas DraRry chapter 43 . 7/9/2016
I immensely enjoying your story. The problem you have here is just a matter of consistency. For example, Lucius' father. There's a chapter in Darkest Night that you mentioned Lucius' father is Abraxas, when you set Varian as his father in Midnight Sun. Another inconsistency I found is in the full name of your characters. Such as Rial, Sirius, James, Lucius and some others. It'll be great if you keep your story consistent from the beginning till the very end. A good beta reader will help you with that. Anyway, it's a great story. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
AkumaNoKoori chapter 23 . 6/23/2016
*coughs for attention*
Dialborn the same day as ZacharyVoldy ain't knowing his powersborn to those that defied him three times' equals to James, Zachary's and Lily's behavior towards himmark him as his equalTHE TATTOO
CONCLUSION:
Rial is the one the prophesy is actually talking about.
THANK YOU FOR LISTENING
Hainbuche chapter 43 . 6/22/2016
ich gebe zu ich mag keine geschichten die das pairing HP/ DM haben, bsonders wenn HP egal in welcher form als unter oder entsprechend gestellt wird. allerdings muss man mal sagen, dass diese geschichte verdammt spannend ist, gut geschrieben und einmal dran am liebsten bis zu ende zu lesen unabhängig von den pairings. daher... ignorier meine persönliche chara-kritik :) du schreibst richtig richtig gut! lg hainbuche
aki the four tailed fox chapter 43 . 5/11/2016
awesomely loved the stories
ynvellius chapter 38 . 5/7/2016
NOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY AUTHOR? WHYYYYYYYYYYY
Elsforever chapter 28 . 4/15/2016
I absolutely love this story. One thing i noticed though. In the previous chapter you spoke about fudge having been removed as minister. Yet this chapter he still is the minister. This doesnt fit. (These are things you notice when you read your whole story in two days...)
Guest chapter 43 . 4/9/2016
I loved itt
Guest chapter 43 . 3/13/2016
One of the twin should have been black
Guest chapter 43 . 3/13/2016
Beautifully done
slybunny chapter 24 . 3/3/2016
Lol. James didn't deserve that graceful death.
slybunny chapter 15 . 3/3/2016
Old man Potter is so partial that he wouldn't recognize if Zachy killed a teacher. He'd probably say it was self-defense.
slybunny chapter 10 . 3/3/2016
This world is really messed up.
william01pd2018 chapter 43 . 2/22/2016
Beautiful.
RippleInThePond chapter 8 . 2/20/2016
I meant to say this earlier: while Minerva MeowGonagall, I think Minerva McMeownagall is easier to say. Has more of a ring to it.
Guest chapter 43 . 1/22/2016
Good story, but too much gayness.
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