Reviews for Darkest Before Dawn
Guest chapter 8 . 6/28/2015
I love the story and the plot and everything is brilliant BUT something which has been really bugging me all the way through MS as well is their ages! They don't match to the school year Rial is meant to be in - for example in MS he was supposedly 16 but in 4th year due to Zachary being held back a year as a child...when you enter 4th year you're 14 and you turn 15 during the school year - so if the twins had been one year older than their yearmates, that would put them at 15 turning 16 at the end of July of that year, rather than being 16 turning 17. And then in the A/N in this chapter you say that Draco and Rial are 15 and 16 (which would be RIGHT) when you've already had Rial have his 17th birthday (and again, he should be in 7th year, 6th if he'd been held back, but instead this is set in 5th so he's two years ahead again) and then the Quidditch match is said to be in 1996 whereas if it's the first match of the year (ie before the Christmas hols) then it should still be the academic year 1995 for 5th year, considering you've made the twins a year older (born 1979) rather than shifted the canon plotline (which would make 1996 make sense). Really good story though, honestly I'm not flaming, the discrepancies in age, even between your own author's notes and what you've written in the story, were just too big for me to ignore. x
Samie Gdnstf chapter 43 . 6/27/2015
OH MY GOSH I LOVED IT SO MUCH!
emthereble chapter 43 . 6/18/2015
Wow what a fantastic fanfic! !
like-slash chapter 24 . 6/17/2015
He should've stick his wand in Potters eyes, used a couple of torture curses before killing him
like-slash chapter 19 . 6/17/2015
Nice done Regulus, falling for a bitch who treated your nephew like crap his whole life, you stupid prik gaaaaaaarrrrr
Daemonia Azrael Di Oz chapter 43 . 6/15/2015
Beautifull Story !
TheCauldron chapter 43 . 6/10/2015
Brilliant series, really enjoyed it! Only point of irritation was that throughout both stories, every time James's middle names (and I think sirius's once or twice - but don't quote me on that) were mentioned, they were different. Also, apparently everyone had Rowan as a middle name at one point. Regardless of that small point, this is definitely a work to be proud of!
babyvfan chapter 24 . 5/19/2015
I could find a mouth-agape icon I'd use it. But since I don't know one. I'll just use this :0
babyvfan chapter 23 . 5/19/2015
My precious, precious Rial. I'm glad he has people on his corner
babyvfan chapter 21 . 5/19/2015
Oh dear fuck no. Not her. Anyone but her
babyvfan chapter 20 . 5/19/2015
Wow. Okay not that I'm not happy about the kiss, because I am but I keep wondering when the hell are we going to get a Drarry kiss? A beautiful, passionate Drarry kiss
babyvfan chapter 19 . 5/19/2015
I won't lie. I was seriously hoping that we'd get a Drarry kiss by now
babyvfan chapter 18 . 5/19/2015
Honestly I'm with Rial on this one. She didn't even try to comfort him. It's what she deserves
babyvfan chapter 14 . 5/19/2015
Awwwwwwwww.
babyvfan chapter 13 . 5/19/2015
Oh dear god. You know that something is hilarious if Snape is dying from laughter
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