Reviews for Resolution |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. I just- I don't know anymoreI have no words. Well, I do. I have lots to say. But initially I hadn't any. Okay, where do I start? I just feel the need to shower you with compliments, you know? I can't believe I sound incredibly calm, believe me, I'm not. This story, oh my god, this story. I started reading it late last night, had to FORCE MYSELF to sleep (the sun was already out!) and just finished a few minutes ago (a little after lunch). It is suffice to say, that this very welly written, very well plotted fanfiction that you have written... oh god, SIX YEARS AGO, is the culprit to why my bodyclock is messed up at the moment. I've only had two hrs of sleep because I wanted to finish this as fast as possible. But alright, I have to actually give you a proper review (and not just fangirl over your work) of the story per se. Dear lord, I hope you still read reviews because I need to let you know just how much I loved this story. I'm not exaggerating. I had moments when I couldn't. Stop. Smiling. I had to calm myself down (I had to go for a jog!) because I was too happy! This is the first James and Lily multi chaptered fic that I've read and it was a bloody great one. I've been shipping them for the longest of time but only decided to read multi chaptered fics yesterday. I can't believe I've settled for oneshots all these years. Ah, right, review. I love how you portrayed the Marauders! James especially! Lily too of course, but there were parts at the beginning where I found her a bit too self absorbed? (Don't hate me please) But I do understand that it might be because this was written in her perspective and first person narratives can sound sort of selfish. And that she is a teenager. So no harm. Other than that, it was perfect! Their banters, their pent up emotions. The character development was very spot on as well and flow of the story was so smooth. It wasn't rushed nor was it too slow. Ahhhh, I feel like I need to give you an award and congratulate you for this. Sigh. You are brilliant. Thank you so much for writing this. You've no idea how it made me feel. Hope you're having a lovely day! All the love, Vanilla Coated Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love this ff. my favorite that I can remember and I always come back to it. not too long, more friendship and the fluff is perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if you're still active on ff but I just wanted you to know that I loved your story! It was quite something else, not as much fighting between Lily and James and more of a friendship between them. I enjoyed reading it! |
![]() ![]() When you first mentioned Jesus Navas I thought you were talking about Keylor Navas and was shaking my head in disgust, not only on your taste but also your facts as well. (Keylor Navas is Costa Rican.). However, I now see that you were talking about someone completely different, I'm still astounded by your lack of enthusiasm for The Beautiful Game. I realized I've been hating on you for this for quite a while-your story is great by the way; I think you're a great writer and should keep up the good work! |
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![]() ![]() Professor Epsilon? Really? |
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![]() ![]() Absolutely fantastic! This was by far one of the best L/J fanfics I've ever read! |
![]() ![]() Thanks for an amazing story! You are truly talented! |
![]() ![]() I've loved this thoroughly absolutely brilliant masterly Piece of great jilly fan fiction it's been a tremendous Journey that I've enjoyed so very much but then The only two whose story wasn't told was James And lily yet you made alive so vividly It brought happy tears to my eyes.i finally know That they were both feisty and liked getting their Own way like most teenagers do plus their incredible Friendships they kept until the end and beyond. Adieu And a deep heartfelt thanks for your time looking Ve And exceptional generosity for cheering me up after Leaving hospital with magnificent story Do go on relaxing holiday as you deserve it As for fa fiction if it was t for the superlative potter Stories trust me they'd be a winner. All my love Elizabeth skinner from Australia. |
![]() ![]() Right now I'm feeling very sad as this is the last Time I'll be reading this exceptionally truly wondrous Love story although of will write back to James he's sure to have saved her letters and hidden Them at tha back of his vault at gringo tots where The death eaters couldn't find it its an enchantedone. You couldn't sound snobby at all there's no fear on That's ore trust hoping that James has the Potters family engagement ring with him on new Years eve is Sirius will leave them all me while He proposes marriage to gorgeous lily whom Will scream yes obviously .id like to thank you from the Bottom of my heart for writing such an awe Inspiring exceptionally thoroughly perfect radiant Love story for these two crazy wonderful youngClassy Magical people whom discovered the path to true love Is full of ups and downs with an exquisite beautiful Scenario towards the end you really deserve all the Most golden accolades from your peers at fa fiction For this remarkably brilliant superlative story. Elizabeth skinner |
![]() ![]() I'm absolutely loving this exceptionally dramatic Cliff hanger I'm just wondering what happened surely not Remus still it could e been when he was transforming I love Remus the voice of sanity amongst The others although lily might go all crazy for awhile Perfectly has always been full Of life at full sprint even running towards lily I'm hoping That he'll consider this a wake up call and romantically Spill his guts about his deep feelings for lily while She's playing nurse this is going to be a real doozy Of a enchanting love story but please it's time for A very long make out session lasting hours on end As there's not been any so far except when they were Drunk which wasn't counted. You've become an awe Inspiring highly talented writer whom has a inbuilt Sense of great exceptionally wondrous knowledge For this unique couple that's warm hearted and Entirely magical I've changed my mind your one In a trillion my love Elizabeth Skinner |
![]() ![]() Don't get me wrong I'll always love James except he's Making lily cry tears with his idiotic behaviour that's not On although she could always picture him hanging upside down in filchs office smeared in honey to Bring back her laughter apart from the last sentence this was an amazingly spectacular amusing chapter that had Me laughing like a hyena,he's truly shy around lily for Heavens sake he's the leader of the marauders how Can he turn into a namby Pambula when she's right There way to strange for a very confident smoking Hot wizard from a pure blood family even though it's Very very sweet however it's time me to bite the Bullet and tell her hoe he really feels about the love Of his heavens it shouldn't be that hard he's A quidditch captain although she's the one so it Could be nerves.i owe you an apology my keyboard on' My iPads acting strangely however you'll always be my Favourite jilly fan fiction author as this wonderful story Has become the greatest most imaginative one I've Read which has them as normal magical teenagers Going through the pangs of love taken them From hating to love so thank you very much for Keeping their uniqueness your one in a million. Elizabeth songs |
![]() ![]() First of all I loved this chapter as I'm more interested in Regulus than seeing lily getting drunk again although If James doesn't cease being absolutely moronically Stupid by going out with the obnoxious Audrey then Lily can lose her fiery temper and give him some Attitude before the major make out session he's Being cowardly that's unlike James more like Peter Actually , maybe Sirius is trying to play matchmaker As he likes lily and thinks she's great for James he Hated Chloe plus he's a nosy Parker whom needs To be a big brother poking his nose where it's wanted To quote James your spectacular story is bloody Amazingly brilliant and totally marvellous with each Sentence and characters that have so much heart Sincerity caring yet strength the great mix that Every teenager needs you're absolutely out standing In every way as an skinner |