Reviews for Resolution
DemonicLilith.2002 chapter 1 . 1/3/2018
I've already read LaT and I've already cried over commentarius how cn she be so cruel as to end it in the middle ! btw. plzz tell me another jily or dramione fanfiction plzzzz
Fred's fanatic chapter 4 . 12/28/2017
Really now he's acting concerned after treating lily like
A second class witch because she won't come across
With some action doesn't like quidditch or being vilely
And humiliatingly insulted I'm losing patience with this
Kings court jester why he thinks this cold blooded treatment will win her I'm positive won't happen being
A redhead myself I'dmake. Someone pay for treating
Me like that bellatrix wouldn't be seen as truly evil if
That occurred though I'm on Severus side okay he
Called lily a foul name but so has James potter the
Snake and he was supposed to love lily yet real
Men don't need to use filthy revolting words they're
Gentle yet strong and protective also plus sev had a
Rotten childhood similar to Harry's except sev was
Pummelled daily with his fathers fists potter is a
Spoils annoying brat plus snaps betrayed voldy for
Lily that's true love yet potters sulking like a sullen
Lazy brutish worm big deal I'm still hoping he could
Start behaving like a grown up and exhibiting sensitivity
As he's becoming exceedingly boring as hades so
Quickly plus bullies should really get extinguished by
Death eaters he will never ever be good enough for
Lily so please could you write some honest caring
Thoughtful chapters as while it's interesting I'm kind of
Losing patience with his snide vicious mean remarks
Plus Lily's red haired so am I and I'm sorry to say this
Story has turned into a potter hates lily Evans story she
Deserves better treatment I will read the first sentence
In chapter five then farewell for now .love Elizabeth
Skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 3 . 12/28/2017
Well I'm loving playing devils advocate against potter
He just makes it so easy for people to hate him for
Being such am obnoxious over bearing bullying spoils
Nasty oaf without any manners or class but really lily
Didn't deserve his spitefulness yet she got it aimed at
Her for six long years ,I think she should've Avada kedarva him she's a redhead so I'm hoping he starts to
Grow up sooner than later as this is exactly what she
Knew he would do as he's done it forever except maybe
A different hair colour still with black as his so called
Best friend yet by ignoring her all that's doing is getting
Her interest in the wrong way boy he's dumb but I'm
Positive that there must be some silver lining for him
Coming soon I just hope he doesn't do anything to ruin
It but being potter the jerk he certainly will if he's that
Insecure maybe he should've joined the death eaters
After all he's a bully and a toe rag a perfect fit yet your
Brilliant wonderful writing keeps me highly interested
In this wacky fun loving suspenseful courageous love
Story although some light honest fluffy moments would
Be great to see soon though not with Chloe please as
His vicious antics are getting rather petulant and
Vindictive so some light hearted chapters would be
Tremendous if you could please do it though I'm definitely hooked on this fascinating story you go
Lily redheads rule the school,so thank you very much.
Love Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 2 . 12/28/2017
I'm loving Lily's thoughts they're uncannily astute and
To often accurate though potters run to form again with
One of his usual trashy blondes to take his minute little
Small mind off his egotistical mind away from his real
Problem being. He's not worthy of lily Evans and he
Cannot handle it as for Sirius I always preferred regulus
His brother and yes she could give the both of them
Detention though she's right about those two being
Pricks redheads probably invented is an
Absolute sweetheart how he want revolted by his friends
Disgusting attitudes puzzles me he's so classy and
like to apologise if your a blonde I don't mean
To insult you just Chloe in this exceptionally illuminating
Highly fascinating bewildering rather puzzling yet still
Full of amusing moments particularly when potter,black
And Chloe fall flat on their faces in the mud hopefully
In front of the entire school after a quidditch match
Plus blacks just jealous of Lily's naturally gorgeous
Looks as he only dated plastic airhead bimbos whom
Cannot think of anything intelligent to say ever he's
Very irritating but then unlike the weasley twins he's
A bad potter didn't attempt to stop black
From being his cruel small minded vicious self and lily
Realised it as did Remus whom all potter heads love
Though I'm definitely loving what you've written its
Simply stunning very creative highly amusing though
I'm on Lily's side it would be great to see potter feeling
Devastated by what's happened except he's far to selfish
But honestly it's incredibly wonderful strong warm very
Outstanding full of tremendous one liners that are
Remarkably original yet uniquely appropriate but it
Would be great fun to see potter jealous of someone
Lily gets interested in preferably very handsome yet
A powerful wizard whom is protective of her and plays
Quidditch better than potter maybe another redhead
If either of the prewett twins are still there but it's
Just a suggestion for this utterly delightful ingenious
Witty intense brilliant enchanting quirky interesting
Love story with an exciting magnificent realistic spin
On their very strange courtship yet it's highly amusing
Though I'd still love to see James humiliated soon in
Front of his new klutzy girlfriend ugh and having lily
Laugh in his face as she's a redhead whom knows
How to hurt people but I'm thoroughly enjoying such
A remarkably sensational thrilling love story which
Is totally awe inspiring so thank much plus
Remus is truly incredibly insightful and truly amazing
Good Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
Alright you go lily and sock it to him anyway you want to
Just because he's finally admitted to himself that he's in
Love with her big deal he's called her every filthy revolting name under the sun though he's acting hurt at
The moment ,I'm on Lily's side we redheads stick together through thick and thin plus cruelty can be our
Middle names and I've always liked Severus he had a
Rotten childhood on a par with regulus and Sirius blacks
Actually except worse and now potters going to act like
A spoilt selfish cold blooded reptilian brat as he got given another set down by lily poor little boy maybe a
Trashy witch can give him something ,Lily's worth a lot
More than that plus treated like a real lady for once by
A real actually loving every word I've read its
Simply that James was lucky to win her heart after he
Bullied her So viciously for six long years plus she's
A redhead she could've done better although Remus
Was my favourite marauder and it's absolutely hard
To understand how he put up with James stupidity yet
As your brilliant creative imagination will be able to
Recreate their strange weird love between lily and ugh
James bully potter which should get you to top of the
Class as only a very few others could explain it but
I'd like him to be put through. The wringer plus some
Chinese water torture maybe the rack occasionally he
Hasn't impressed me yet but hopefully there will be
Some incredibly tough yet captivatingly momentous
Insightful soul searching chapters for both of them as
Your delightfully highly interesting love story becomes
More adventurous and exciting to be honest I almost
Used the word wicked as in amusing but I decided to
Leave that word for my favourite fremione fan fiction
Love stories namely Fred Weasley and hermione granger
But I'll think of a special term for these two soon hopefully but thank you so very much for a truly bewitching suspenseful colourful love story I'm fascinated good Elizabeth skinner.
Guest chapter 37 . 11/28/2017
I know you wrote this about a bazillion years ago, but it remains to be my favorite fanfic to date. Absolutely fantastic work!
Guest chapter 37 . 9/23/2017
I honestly love this story so much. I’ve read it five times so far and I’m about to go read it again. This is definitely by far my favourite fan fiction ever. I hope you’ll write something new soon, you have such an amazing talent for writing and I would love to read more - maybe a James POV?
Anonymous chapter 31 . 8/24/2017
King of the World by Young Rising Sons is a good song for the Mauraders and Gryffindoor in general
JilyShipper123 chapter 37 . 8/23/2017
OMG! I love this! This is the best Jily fanfic I ever read! WOW! Please make another fanfic like this,only this time it's a Severus Snape X Lily Evans X James Potter xD! Btw,I would prefer it if James gets to win Lily's heart in the end.
Kate chapter 37 . 8/22/2017
I don't know if you'll actually read this but I loved it - I read it all in one sitting - thank you x
ps best jily on ff
Guest chapter 37 . 8/16/2017
This was a amzimg story and comontaries was also amazing
PjoHpThgFangirl101 chapter 37 . 8/3/2017
OMG THAT LAST LINE WAS SOOOO SIAJEBSKWOWSNS. I may be overreacting but jily is my OTP. Btw, I love your style of writing and this fanfic is beautiful. I hope you never stop writing
Dany chapter 37 . 8/1/2017
I'm gonna cry I'm gonna cry

You just have destroyed all future relationships I could ever have because now I'm not accepting anything less than a James Potter. This was amazing, I spent the last day reading it and although I wanted to kill Lily a couple of times, I loved every second of your fic - and I have one of that scary big tests coming but I regret nothing! This was amazing, one of my favs (and I have read nearly 748247 Jily fanfics!)
Dany chapter 28 . 8/1/2017
NO NO NO NO NO. NO. JUST NO. ARGH LILY TAKE IT BACK

btw, love your writing. This is the first time I'm reviewing a fic before the end because I just needed this little outburst

Gotta keep reading, looking forward to some jily scenes
StoryWriting1414 chapter 37 . 7/28/2017
Can I just say, this is one of my favourite Harry Potter ff EVER! You got the characters exactly how I imagined them, and your writing is incredible! I am constantly coming back to this ff whenever I feel in the mood for a bit of Jily, which is 90% of the time, and I always get addicted to it. I know it's been 6 years and idk if you are still active on ff but can I just say that you nailed this story and I look up to you ;) Xx
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