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![]() ![]() ![]() I've already read LaT and I've already cried over commentarius how cn she be so cruel as to end it in the middle ! btw. plzz tell me another jily or dramione fanfiction plzzzz |
![]() ![]() Really now he's acting concerned after treating lily like A second class witch because she won't come across With some action doesn't like quidditch or being vilely And humiliatingly insulted I'm losing patience with this Kings court jester why he thinks this cold blooded treatment will win her I'm positive won't happen being A redhead myself I'dmake. Someone pay for treating Me like that bellatrix wouldn't be seen as truly evil if That occurred though I'm on Severus side okay he Called lily a foul name but so has James potter the Snake and he was supposed to love lily yet real Men don't need to use filthy revolting words they're Gentle yet strong and protective also plus sev had a Rotten childhood similar to Harry's except sev was Pummelled daily with his fathers fists potter is a Spoils annoying brat plus snaps betrayed voldy for Lily that's true love yet potters sulking like a sullen Lazy brutish worm big deal I'm still hoping he could Start behaving like a grown up and exhibiting sensitivity As he's becoming exceedingly boring as hades so Quickly plus bullies should really get extinguished by Death eaters he will never ever be good enough for Lily so please could you write some honest caring Thoughtful chapters as while it's interesting I'm kind of Losing patience with his snide vicious mean remarks Plus Lily's red haired so am I and I'm sorry to say this Story has turned into a potter hates lily Evans story she Deserves better treatment I will read the first sentence In chapter five then farewell for now .love Elizabeth Skinner. |
![]() ![]() Well I'm loving playing devils advocate against potter He just makes it so easy for people to hate him for Being such am obnoxious over bearing bullying spoils Nasty oaf without any manners or class but really lily Didn't deserve his spitefulness yet she got it aimed at Her for six long years ,I think she should've Avada kedarva him she's a redhead so I'm hoping he starts to Grow up sooner than later as this is exactly what she Knew he would do as he's done it forever except maybe A different hair colour still with black as his so called Best friend yet by ignoring her all that's doing is getting Her interest in the wrong way boy he's dumb but I'm Positive that there must be some silver lining for him Coming soon I just hope he doesn't do anything to ruin It but being potter the jerk he certainly will if he's that Insecure maybe he should've joined the death eaters After all he's a bully and a toe rag a perfect fit yet your Brilliant wonderful writing keeps me highly interested In this wacky fun loving suspenseful courageous love Story although some light honest fluffy moments would Be great to see soon though not with Chloe please as His vicious antics are getting rather petulant and Vindictive so some light hearted chapters would be Tremendous if you could please do it though I'm definitely hooked on this fascinating story you go Lily redheads rule the school,so thank you very much. Love Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() I'm loving Lily's thoughts they're uncannily astute and To often accurate though potters run to form again with One of his usual trashy blondes to take his minute little Small mind off his egotistical mind away from his real Problem being. He's not worthy of lily Evans and he Cannot handle it as for Sirius I always preferred regulus His brother and yes she could give the both of them Detention though she's right about those two being Pricks redheads probably invented is an Absolute sweetheart how he want revolted by his friends Disgusting attitudes puzzles me he's so classy and like to apologise if your a blonde I don't mean To insult you just Chloe in this exceptionally illuminating Highly fascinating bewildering rather puzzling yet still Full of amusing moments particularly when potter,black And Chloe fall flat on their faces in the mud hopefully In front of the entire school after a quidditch match Plus blacks just jealous of Lily's naturally gorgeous Looks as he only dated plastic airhead bimbos whom Cannot think of anything intelligent to say ever he's Very irritating but then unlike the weasley twins he's A bad potter didn't attempt to stop black From being his cruel small minded vicious self and lily Realised it as did Remus whom all potter heads love Though I'm definitely loving what you've written its Simply stunning very creative highly amusing though I'm on Lily's side it would be great to see potter feeling Devastated by what's happened except he's far to selfish But honestly it's incredibly wonderful strong warm very Outstanding full of tremendous one liners that are Remarkably original yet uniquely appropriate but it Would be great fun to see potter jealous of someone Lily gets interested in preferably very handsome yet A powerful wizard whom is protective of her and plays Quidditch better than potter maybe another redhead If either of the prewett twins are still there but it's Just a suggestion for this utterly delightful ingenious Witty intense brilliant enchanting quirky interesting Love story with an exciting magnificent realistic spin On their very strange courtship yet it's highly amusing Though I'd still love to see James humiliated soon in Front of his new klutzy girlfriend ugh and having lily Laugh in his face as she's a redhead whom knows How to hurt people but I'm thoroughly enjoying such A remarkably sensational thrilling love story which Is totally awe inspiring so thank much plus Remus is truly incredibly insightful and truly amazing Good Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() Alright you go lily and sock it to him anyway you want to Just because he's finally admitted to himself that he's in Love with her big deal he's called her every filthy revolting name under the sun though he's acting hurt at The moment ,I'm on Lily's side we redheads stick together through thick and thin plus cruelty can be our Middle names and I've always liked Severus he had a Rotten childhood on a par with regulus and Sirius blacks Actually except worse and now potters going to act like A spoilt selfish cold blooded reptilian brat as he got given another set down by lily poor little boy maybe a Trashy witch can give him something ,Lily's worth a lot More than that plus treated like a real lady for once by A real actually loving every word I've read its Simply that James was lucky to win her heart after he Bullied her So viciously for six long years plus she's A redhead she could've done better although Remus Was my favourite marauder and it's absolutely hard To understand how he put up with James stupidity yet As your brilliant creative imagination will be able to Recreate their strange weird love between lily and ugh James bully potter which should get you to top of the Class as only a very few others could explain it but I'd like him to be put through. The wringer plus some Chinese water torture maybe the rack occasionally he Hasn't impressed me yet but hopefully there will be Some incredibly tough yet captivatingly momentous Insightful soul searching chapters for both of them as Your delightfully highly interesting love story becomes More adventurous and exciting to be honest I almost Used the word wicked as in amusing but I decided to Leave that word for my favourite fremione fan fiction Love stories namely Fred Weasley and hermione granger But I'll think of a special term for these two soon hopefully but thank you so very much for a truly bewitching suspenseful colourful love story I'm fascinated good Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() I know you wrote this about a bazillion years ago, but it remains to be my favorite fanfic to date. Absolutely fantastic work! |
![]() ![]() I honestly love this story so much. I’ve read it five times so far and I’m about to go read it again. This is definitely by far my favourite fan fiction ever. I hope you’ll write something new soon, you have such an amazing talent for writing and I would love to read more - maybe a James POV? |
![]() ![]() King of the World by Young Rising Sons is a good song for the Mauraders and Gryffindoor in general |
![]() ![]() OMG! I love this! This is the best Jily fanfic I ever read! WOW! Please make another fanfic like this,only this time it's a Severus Snape X Lily Evans X James Potter xD! Btw,I would prefer it if James gets to win Lily's heart in the end. |
![]() ![]() I don't know if you'll actually read this but I loved it - I read it all in one sitting - thank you x ps best jily on ff |
![]() ![]() This was a amzimg story and comontaries was also amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG THAT LAST LINE WAS SOOOO SIAJEBSKWOWSNS. I may be overreacting but jily is my OTP. Btw, I love your style of writing and this fanfic is beautiful. I hope you never stop writing |
![]() ![]() I'm gonna cry I'm gonna cry You just have destroyed all future relationships I could ever have because now I'm not accepting anything less than a James Potter. This was amazing, I spent the last day reading it and although I wanted to kill Lily a couple of times, I loved every second of your fic - and I have one of that scary big tests coming but I regret nothing! This was amazing, one of my favs (and I have read nearly 748247 Jily fanfics!) |
![]() ![]() NO NO NO NO NO. NO. JUST NO. ARGH LILY TAKE IT BACK btw, love your writing. This is the first time I'm reviewing a fic before the end because I just needed this little outburst Gotta keep reading, looking forward to some jily scenes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I just say, this is one of my favourite Harry Potter ff EVER! You got the characters exactly how I imagined them, and your writing is incredible! I am constantly coming back to this ff whenever I feel in the mood for a bit of Jily, which is 90% of the time, and I always get addicted to it. I know it's been 6 years and idk if you are still active on ff but can I just say that you nailed this story and I look up to you ;) Xx |