Reviews for When I Get Back
Anonny chapter 1 . 8/25
Achaon! You should read my comment on 'Uninterrupted Interrupted Moment' - lol! We think alike. ;-)

TruthBetween, Good little piece, but if this happened at 3am, 3am whose time? 8-O

I found his breaking of eye contact and nervous laugh when Mac asked him if he was in love decidedly ambiguous - nervous about discussing what he felt for Jordan? Not quite ready to admit to perhaps having stronger feelings for Mac that could be pursued if they were no longer in the same chain of command, was she referring to his love of his planes and he guessed that or she wasn't but he thought that and in either case he was too embarrassed to admit it, was she hinting she might feel a bit more and he wasn't ready to deal with it... or what?! Or just another way for the powers that be to torture us? Yeah, definitely the latter. ;-)
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Great story! Very sweet!
Michi uk chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
That's so much better.
marye904 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
loved it
starryeyes12 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
great story
babyy qirl x3 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Short, but sweet. I loved it.
achaon chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
In the show that would have taken an extra 15 seconds or so, and would have changed the course of history.
gypsyrose06 chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Ah, if only it had been such!