|Reviews for BBW and the Unthinkable|
| dragonbabezee chapter 1 . 6/22
That was a well written one shot and lemon! Thanks!
One thing wasn't expecting was for Vegeta to perform in the level of sex god after the wind up of his self denial and annoyance over his attraction to Bulma. Was this a deliberate bait and switch?
| Pretenders chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Oh my! So detailed and vivid! Amazing work!
| LW12 chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
I love it
| Galaxylam84 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Really nice and sexy story.
| smalsa chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Woah! Now that was just...woah! You are a really talented writer, why haven't you written more stuff? As soon as I finished this, I was totally looking forward to reading other material from you but found none! I hope you find the time to write so more BV stories!
| bval1 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
| abbieouji chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
0.0 so ... heavy ... LOVE IT!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
| laraya luv dbz chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
love it and good for a first timer
| Hareta-chan chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
I'm sad that this is the only story you have written! Your writing is wonderful and descriptive and I just had to leave a comment because one of my favorite parts other than the vivid detail and length of your story is your grammar and spelling! I had a great time reading this, and most of the stories I've read often have many grammatical errors and I didn't notice any on yours. I tend to be a grammar nazi at times and I find it hard to read stories if the grammar is incorrect but I thoroughly enjoyed reading yours. Thank you for making my day! 3
| Lavonya chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEAL TO THIS!
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Please can you make a sequel or a series to this?
| Angel of Pandemonium chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
great story. i really liked it.
| TheRammbler chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Well done! It took me a goddamn hour to finish reading it (since I'm a super slow read O ) so I'm pleased it turned out quite well. I loved your style of writing! I enjoyed how you didn't have grammar mistakes popping up everywhere, as a lot of fanfics do. Thanks for the fantastic situation. My favorite scene was where Vegeta found the bubble bath! Anyways, thanks again! And good luck on future works!
| HawkAngel XD chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
darn that was hot! very hot indeed!
| TaminFury chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
WoW. Just WoW. I can't seem to get my brain working again to describe how much I loved that story. You should get an Emmy ( or some sort of pat on the back award). That was freaking fan-tab-ulous!