|Reviews for The Drawing Room|
| prose.titute chapter 2 . 4/9
You tease! :O How dare you leave off at such a tantalising part! Oh please, please continue this fic! I beg you.
| midnight sun chapter 2 . 4/18/2012
ANGSTY! I love it! Please continue, for all your readers.
| Nan Helgeke chapter 2 . 6/1/2011
Curious if there is any intention to take the story further? Rather ominous but still openended ending of 2md chapter.
| Mercyy chapter 2 . 5/15/2011
Great story! please add more chapters! I cant wait to read what happens next.
| ThoughtlessWriter chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
I really like this story. I don't think there are enough good Lucius/Hermione stories. Lucius isn't a nice guy and he's not going to fall in love with Hermione and have a happy ending. He might be intrigued by her, he might want her, but he's still an evil sadistic bigot. I would really love to see this story continue...
| Annalisa89 chapter 2 . 9/22/2010
I likt it update soon
| RedsAttic chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
I look forward to reading future chapters...
| yasmina chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
ohhh great start for a bodice ripper..
| camnz chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
Poor Hermione, it looks like she is in for a long night.
| Megan Consoer chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| linalove chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
xxx Lina :)
| Mandy88 chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
This is a really interesting story so far. Please update again soon!
| Oz chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
I'm enjoying this but I have a suggestion: break up your paragraphs a bit more. For instance, if someone has a line in the middle of the paragraph, make that a paragraph of it's own.
Example: (In your work this is all one paragraph)
Lucius released her forearm. Suddenly, he yanked both of her arms behind her back with just one of his own, raised his wand and quietly said a spell that bound her thin wrists together.
"You BASTARD!" hissed Hermione "Let me go!"
"Oh, we both know I'm not going to do that. I'm having far too much fun to entertain such a thought". He could see that it was his smugness, rather than his physical restraint was annoying Hermione the most. He let go of her fixed wrists and dragged his hand up her back before setting it to rest on her shoulder. Facing her, Malfoy ran his tongue over his thin, cruel lips as he continued to smile menacingly. "Now Granger, are you going to be a good girl and follow me? Or am I going to have to force you? " he drawled questioningly.
Hermione, well aware that she could do little whilst restrained, stared into his eyes deeply: "Fuck off, Malfoy". But she added "I don't have a choice, so I suppose I'll have to endure whatever it is you have in store".
It's much MUCH easier to read this way. Other than that, great start, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| moon on the willow chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
A promising beginning.
| LooneyLovey chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
Tis good so far and I look forward to where you take this story,