Reviews for Kindled spirits Book 1
luxlow chapter 3 . 12/31/2010
lorraine chapter one is good, but it is FULL of spelling and grammar mistakes. Also be mindful of your sentance structure. Your first sentance made me confused so I had to read it again. Break it down a bit. Also i just got totally confused when it jumped to chapter 10 of what seems to be a spin off from naruto.
Games-Are-My-Life chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
it's good
spyrolink chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
That surprised me that Terrador had trouble flying. But it was a good chapter in itself
Alec the Dark Angel chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
I'm glad I can be of help.

The Angel of Darkness, Alec
spyrolink chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
This seems like a good story. I always wanted to know how the four Guardians grew up
Alec the Dark Angel chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
You don't see many stories like this. So that means this is going to be my opinion anyway.

The Angel of Darkness, Alec