Reviews for An Unlikely Proposal
Michi uk chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
That was so sweet, can't wait to read the final chapter.
starryeyes12 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
great story
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
aw, loved it. such a imaginative way to propose
Saissa chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Go Loren!

Mac is going to have to learn that if you push too hard, too often, eventually you will push them away altogether.

Playing hard to get all the time, does not make a relationship.