Reviews for An Unlikely Wedding
carolfd chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Great series of stories, JediKnight. Enjoyed them all. Looking forward to reading more of your collection.
Michi uk chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Loved this story, glad Harm and Mac made up.
jpstar57 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Nice story. This was different. Everyone in the viewing audience knew Harm and Mac would end up together. This was a refreshing spin on that. You didn't bash Mac to much, but you had her come to her senses at the end. Like the way you explained the assasin's resemblance to Loren also.
starryeyes12 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
great story
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
great story! Loved Harm and Loren married and a real family with David now. Though, the cost of the wedding and especially of the wedding dress made Loren look like one of those Bridezillas, hehehehe (who in their right mind would shell out 100 THOUSAND bucks on a stupid DRESS, especially one worn only once... well, optimistically speaking worn only once :) ).

too bad Mac never stopped being a bitch on the show, much less tried to make amends for the things she'd said and done. But then again that would've meant apologizing and Mac lived by the crede "Never apologize"...

Amazing fic and too bad you never found the inspiration for more. Hopefully your re-emergence means we can look forward to more of HL fics.
Saissa chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Good story _ I hope there are more chapters - maybe a future sequel when David is older

Mac really needs to grow up - she lost Harm because she was too lazy to tell him how she felt. She was so insistant that the man has to say those 3 little words first.

Loren has had to be a bitch to cope with her family.

I like her more and more.