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Roxion-Chan chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
no zachary!...*punches diz!MEANIE YOU RUINED THE BEST HERO EVER! btw nice way to include 358/2 days!
SetoshiArenhariKai chapter 5 . 8/27/2010
Ahh... now I see how the plot intertwines with KH DAYS and KH2. Nice work! Keep on typing!
RosalieYuffieSaphira chapter 3 . 8/25/2010
Hey Sis, I love it! there's afew different grammer errors or issing words or whatever. It's great though
SetoshiArenhariKai chapter 3 . 8/25/2010
I wonder if there will be repercussions to Zack's actions later on... oh well,keep on typing!
ZoraMalfoy chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
Interesting start! Definitely has a lot of potential. Zack's one of my favorite characters (totally excited when I found out he's supposed to be in BbS) so I had to check this one out.

It's a good start, but one thing I might recommend would be looking into getting a beta for it. There are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. It would just make it easier to read and probably attract more readers. Just a thought. :)

Keep up the good work!

Take Care,

Zora
SetoshiArenhariKai chapter 2 . 8/22/2010
I see potential for this story. Keep on typing!
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