|Reviews for About Nightmares and Daydreams|
| Leolaws chapter 2 . 4/11
God. I think this is one of the best love scene I ever read. I am once again completely stunned by the beauty of your writing. And this is just so beautiful. It is simple, and real, and like most love-making. It's not fairytale like, it's awkward, and vulnerable, deliciously so. It's just perfect and I think it is as I imagined a "first" between them both. Because Minerva is old and you didn't forget that, and Hermione is completely new to this.
Anyway. I love this. I'mma keep reading your work because it is absolutely marvelous.
| Texaschic1 chapter 3 . 9/28/2014
Loved it and looking forward to reading the sequal.
| Marisa McGonagall Black chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
Great story please update! :)
| LethalPoison chapter 3 . 8/17/2011
Wow great story right reading the next one now :)
I'm addicted lol
| owl.called.raven chapter 3 . 1/23/2011
Total awww factor.
| Lisachan87 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
You are an awesome writer. Loved everything about this story. wonderful sex scenes, but I feel sorry for poor MinervaP
| caradens chapter 3 . 9/15/2010
excellent story thanks
| Duchene-fan chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
The amount of conflicting feelings going on must be so overwhelming for Minerva, but so true to life and really well Hope Hermione takes Minerva's decision well.
| watchitstark chapter 3 . 9/3/2010
Okay, it's a good story, but Minerva loving Albus? No way. I don;t see it like that at all. But, come on Minerva, believe it, as Hermione would never do anything as serious as that on a fluke!
| JUJUChick16 chapter 3 . 9/3/2010
Could you please write more! If your happy with the ending then I am and I can let my imagination run wild. It was amazing!
| hermin22 chapter 3 . 9/3/2010
Loved it. Very good chapter!
| cressey chapter 2 . 8/30/2010
erm :S I'm probably not going to be your favorite person after this review, but i'll survive :)
It was far too much, far too fast. I think, that maybe minerva would have wanted to comfort the girl when she was crying, pulling her back into a hug, but for it to turn into your average joes porn vid was just too O.O
If they were to go down that route... Don't you think Minerva would have thought more about waiting? She is the girls headmistress after all, which you pointed out a few times, and Hermione doesn't have that long left of school, which you also pointed out. Minerva has enough years behind her to know that a few months isnt that long.
It would have been good to see Minerva come to terms with her feelings slowly. To see her fighting it a bit, to see her warming to her more and more over time.
The sex scenes, were heavy and a bit off putting. Like i said too much too soon. Most relationships take at least months to get there, and believe me all in one session is pushing it a bit too far. I think you have the ability to be a great writer, I just think you need to extend your stories, give them a time line and tone down the sex. A story can be hot without it being so much. Less would definitly be more in this case.
I'm not trying to flame you by the way. Constructive critisism, i hope. Please keep writing, practice makes perfect :)
| Duchene-fan chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
WOW! Just wow. This is a pairing I have never even thought of but it makes so much sense.
Hope you get more muse for this pairing, love it!
| Laplaciana chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
*getting my hands operational enough to manually close my jaw*
Just out of curiosity, will there be a sequel?
| JUJUChick16 chapter 2 . 8/26/2010
That can't be it! Update again please, or atleast do an epilogue were Minerva atleast says 'I love you.'