|Reviews for Laika|
| Sounddrive chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Aw . . . poor Cosmos . . .
| Fastern chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
I envy your attention to detail. You really flesh out a story by focusing on these little details and really going into things that most of us just brush off. And I also like how you really focused on the "childlike perspective" of this story. You really played it out well. I remember seeing things in a similiar fashion when I was a kid, so it's a refreshing change from all the stories from an teenager/adult perspective. The ending was very ironic and really...SHATTERING. But in a good way. Still shattering. DX
The only bad thing I can say about this was that it was a little difficult to read. Probably the perspective. I'm sooo not used to reading stories through the eyes of a child. I must also admit I'm not wild about Cosmos calling Glyph and Beachcomber "mom" and "dad" because it seems out of place for giant robots.
But still a good story.