Reviews for The Hive:
chosmer chapter 12 . 7/1/2013
Noooooo! I can't believe I started this story to catch up at THIS chapter. This story is like Mad Max meets The Host meets porn. Loving it.
edward-n-bella-fr-eternity1207 chapter 12 . 6/26/2013
Goodness! Absolutely amazing job! I cannot wait for more so update real soon! Xoxoxo
dreamiedreamer chapter 12 . 6/22/2013
What a cliffy! I think Charlie shot James not Edward, he didn't want James alive to give him away, he was trying to frame Edward for all James's injuries, he cut off his tongue to prevent him from saying anything that would incriminate himself. Hopefully we won't be waiting as long for the next chapter.
sballLuvr5 chapter 12 . 6/20/2013
Charlie is a dick. I hope he shot James. Great chapter :)
Kristi
angelari7 chapter 12 . 6/16/2013
Its Bella isn't it?
REgrrl chapter 12 . 6/16/2013
Thanks for posting the new chapter! I rarely read in progress stories, because I am always afraid they may be abandoned. That being said your other stories are fantastic and I have enjoyed them thoroughly. Understood that real life means that fics are written in whatever time they take. Just wanted to encourage you that we are always appreciative when you post. Now I am going back to reread the story to date.
polyphany chapter 12 . 6/12/2013
Love it!
chicalicious chapter 12 . 6/11/2013
We're almost done? Really? I guess I got spoiled with the epic length of DiMD. I'm glad that Edward was able to beat James to the point of him begging for death (it's sick and twisted the way I embrace violence). I'm wondering who cut James' tongue out. Other than Edward I can't imagine who Charlie would've been aiming at. Crazy cliffie!

-C
debnin chapter 12 . 6/11/2013
Bella needs to find out about charlie
BLilTXgirl chapter 12 . 6/10/2013
Of course his tongue was cut out. It wouldn't do for him to even have the possibility of putting Charlie for the monster he is, now would it?

And that cliffy is just mean... :)
rubyblue9696 chapter 12 . 6/7/2013
:)...but bella...don't hurt the man-goods, okay?...especially if the man is edward...ha...

xxx jess
nitammi chapter 12 . 6/6/2013
What a fascinating story! I thought I could get away with reading the whole thing but I guess I caught up with you. Its my dream to have my own hive someday... thanks for writing this.
rubell chapter 12 . 6/4/2013
crap on a cracker! guessing he is going to shoot james not edward, but there were so many witnesses to what exactly edward did to james, how can charlie even try and pin the rest of his injuries on edward? as for bella? squeezing his sac? best thing i have read all day!
alisapay1 chapter 12 . 6/3/2013
Thanks for writing and it was worth the wait! Mwah!
Kalla Kalia chapter 12 . 6/2/2013
LOVED IT!
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