|Reviews for The Hive:|
| TrulyOutrageous chapter 13 . 7/17/2013
Glad Jasper, Alice and the baby are okay and they got rid of Charlie love how Bella took control.
| staceleo chapter 13 . 7/17/2013
What a fantastic, final chapter! Amazing job!
| FranRichards chapter 13 . 7/17/2013
I've loved this fic. I'd love to see them fall pregnant and have maybe twins? Please do an epilogue.
| Siobhan Whitlock chapter 13 . 7/17/2013
I loved it! I missed the hive, I was afraid of Charlie.
| jilllapet chapter 13 . 7/17/2013
oh man. what a ride! iso hope for an epi!
| hikingurl chapter 13 . 7/17/2013
Loved reading this story. Thanks for finishing it!
| karmenmasen chapter 12 . 7/9/2013
wtf , i hope that he didnt shoot bella that would really suck. hmmm or maybe he killed james
cant wait till the next one
| chosmer chapter 12 . 7/1/2013
Noooooo! I can't believe I started this story to catch up at THIS chapter. This story is like Mad Max meets The Host meets porn. Loving it.
| edward-n-bella-fr-eternity1207 chapter 12 . 6/26/2013
Goodness! Absolutely amazing job! I cannot wait for more so update real soon! Xoxoxo
| dreamiedreamer chapter 12 . 6/22/2013
What a cliffy! I think Charlie shot James not Edward, he didn't want James alive to give him away, he was trying to frame Edward for all James's injuries, he cut off his tongue to prevent him from saying anything that would incriminate himself. Hopefully we won't be waiting as long for the next chapter.
| sballLuvr5 chapter 12 . 6/20/2013
Charlie is a dick. I hope he shot James. Great chapter :)
| angelari7 chapter 12 . 6/16/2013
Its Bella isn't it?
| REgrrl chapter 12 . 6/16/2013
Thanks for posting the new chapter! I rarely read in progress stories, because I am always afraid they may be abandoned. That being said your other stories are fantastic and I have enjoyed them thoroughly. Understood that real life means that fics are written in whatever time they take. Just wanted to encourage you that we are always appreciative when you post. Now I am going back to reread the story to date.
| polyphany chapter 12 . 6/12/2013
| chicalicious chapter 12 . 6/11/2013
We're almost done? Really? I guess I got spoiled with the epic length of DiMD. I'm glad that Edward was able to beat James to the point of him begging for death (it's sick and twisted the way I embrace violence). I'm wondering who cut James' tongue out. Other than Edward I can't imagine who Charlie would've been aiming at. Crazy cliffie!