Reviews for The Hive:
IndianWalker chapter 13 . 8/20/2013
Very interesting...
Soni's Angel chapter 13 . 8/14/2013
WOW! I can't believe that we have come to the end of this amazing and wonderful story;) Once again Charlie underestimated both Edward and Bella by shooting and killing James. We finally get to know the reason for Charlie's madness, he certainly doesn't give a damn for family just what he can get out of it. Bella standing up to Charlie and showing him that the Hive belongs to her and that she always had the power to take it away from him was a sight to behold. Finally Bella and her people are free of Charlie and his reign of terror and once again Bella proved to be the bigger person by not having him killed but shipped out of his safe haven to serve his time in a hell hole that he deserved. My heart certainly goes out to Bella who so desperately wants a baby with Edward and hopefully with Edward's blood being changed she will have her miracle one day. While I do hope that you do decide to give us an epi just to answer some of our question, I love the fact that you gave us an open ending for any possibilities;) Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story and your awesome words with us;) I wish all the best in any and all future endeavors;) Hopefully we will get to read another story from you soon;)
Soni's Angel chapter 12 . 8/14/2013
Hi lc!

Awesome as always! It is so good to see Edward and Bella reunited and well and I can't blame him for wanting his revenge on James, especially after his display at breakfast. I have to agree with Edward that James was a fool to leave him for dead and his cockiness is gonna cost him.
Damn, Charlie is such an ass who seemingly just wants control over Bella. It would seem that he didn't get the memo that Bella was through with being manipulated and lied to anymore. I wonder what he thought he would achieve in blaming Edward for James serious injuries, was he delusional enough to think that getting Edward out of Bella's life would give him full control back over Bella. I can only hope that Charlie didn't shoot Edward to get his point across. Now on to the next chapter to find out who has being shot;)
stephi910 chapter 13 . 8/13/2013
just found your story and really enjoyed reading...hoping you decide to write an epi!
Kimmie45 chapter 13 . 8/11/2013
Thank you for updating..

I have absolutely enjoyed reading this story. It is so different. Loved it...
JustARead chapter 13 . 8/6/2013
JustARead chapter 12 . 8/6/2013
JustARead chapter 11 . 8/6/2013
Uh oh...
JustARead chapter 10 . 8/6/2013
JustARead chapter 9 . 8/6/2013
Oh no :/
JustARead chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
:( Charlie is power hunry, B could take over
JustARead chapter 7 . 8/6/2013
I figured that'd happen
JustARead chapter 6 . 8/6/2013
JustARead chapter 5 . 8/6/2013
Uh oh
JustARead chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
What?! How? Why?
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