|Reviews for The Hive:|
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/12/2013
cool thanks for sharing :)
| Sunnyincolorado chapter 13 . 11/8/2013
I just finished reading this Fic and loved, loved it. It was so original and yet pretty much stayed true to the characters. My favorite thing in the whole story was the concept of the Hive. You really thought about this world and how it would function. From sleeping quarters to how they would grow food. So very cool. I'm definently going to keep this one in my Favorites list to reread again.
| Erikajo chapter 13 . 10/9/2013
I love that there are still unanswered questions. It means we can hope you get a wild hair and write some more to quench our thirst for knowledge about what happens next.
Thanks so much for the gift of your words. :)
P.S. This would make a great movie! The ratings people would take some of fun out, but the plot is awesome and stands alone. The passionate moments between your E and B are just icing on the cake.
| Erikajo chapter 12 . 10/9/2013
Whoa. You really know how to write a pot-boiler. My pot runneth over. :)
| Whitney Love chapter 13 . 9/29/2013
| Whitney Love chapter 12 . 9/29/2013
Absolutely 100% addicting. Love it.
| princesspewo chapter 13 . 8/29/2013
| IndianWalker chapter 13 . 8/20/2013
| Soni's Angel chapter 13 . 8/14/2013
WOW! I can't believe that we have come to the end of this amazing and wonderful story;) Once again Charlie underestimated both Edward and Bella by shooting and killing James. We finally get to know the reason for Charlie's madness, he certainly doesn't give a damn for family just what he can get out of it. Bella standing up to Charlie and showing him that the Hive belongs to her and that she always had the power to take it away from him was a sight to behold. Finally Bella and her people are free of Charlie and his reign of terror and once again Bella proved to be the bigger person by not having him killed but shipped out of his safe haven to serve his time in a hell hole that he deserved. My heart certainly goes out to Bella who so desperately wants a baby with Edward and hopefully with Edward's blood being changed she will have her miracle one day. While I do hope that you do decide to give us an epi just to answer some of our question, I love the fact that you gave us an open ending for any possibilities;) Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story and your awesome words with us;) I wish all the best in any and all future endeavors;) Hopefully we will get to read another story from you soon;)
| Soni's Angel chapter 12 . 8/14/2013
Awesome as always! It is so good to see Edward and Bella reunited and well and I can't blame him for wanting his revenge on James, especially after his display at breakfast. I have to agree with Edward that James was a fool to leave him for dead and his cockiness is gonna cost him.
Damn, Charlie is such an ass who seemingly just wants control over Bella. It would seem that he didn't get the memo that Bella was through with being manipulated and lied to anymore. I wonder what he thought he would achieve in blaming Edward for James serious injuries, was he delusional enough to think that getting Edward out of Bella's life would give him full control back over Bella. I can only hope that Charlie didn't shoot Edward to get his point across. Now on to the next chapter to find out who has being shot;)
| stephi910 chapter 13 . 8/13/2013
just found your story and really enjoyed reading...hoping you decide to write an epi!
| Kimmie45 chapter 13 . 8/11/2013
Thank you for updating..
I have absolutely enjoyed reading this story. It is so different. Loved it...
| JustARead chapter 13 . 8/6/2013
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