Reviews for The Hive:
MommaAbby chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
Please, please, please tell me that you're going to continue this! I want to see where this story goes...I am HOOKED!
ChickenBPieXxXx chapter 4 . 11/24/2010
love this...so intense... update please xx
LiRock chapter 4 . 11/19/2010
I have been reading Unplanned Perfection(and loving it)so I decided to check this out. So glad I did! I love stories with apocaliptic themes and with unique civilizations and this has both. Add to that the sexual overtones and it's a win win all around.

Keep up the good work!:)
TwilightJemS chapter 4 . 11/15/2010
*sigh* So now I'm caught up on both stories. I thought I'd use this review to point out why I'm loving you as an author...

I love that all the info you give is actually important to the story. Straight to the point & no beating around the bush. Plus, you have a way of weaving the plot that drawn you in. If it was a movie, I'd be on the edge of my seat & watching alone so no one could talk to me, distracting me from all the goodness. You are also great at describing your characters in depth so they become real -in a sense, I do understand reality & that this is just FanFic LOL-. You make me laugh & cry with the characters. Course, the crying could just be the pregnancy hormones, but I don't think so.

All in all, all the makings of an amazing author & I'm so happy that I stumbled upon you!

:)
TwilightJemS chapter 3 . 11/15/2010
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TwilightJemS chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
Happy to hear about no sexual relations between Charlie & Bella. Always a good thing. I've never understood how people could write about something like that. *shudders*

:)
TwilightJemS chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Well, I know you've already added 3 more chapters but I'll still put in my vote that I'd like this to become a full story!

:)
tracieo chapter 4 . 11/11/2010
I'm totally fascinated by this - can't wait for more -
tracieo chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
wow - just wow - must read more -
Erikajo chapter 4 . 11/9/2010
Yep, totally confused and loving it :)
Erikajo chapter 3 . 11/9/2010
Charlie was scary!
Erikajo chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
This is just crazy :) Love it!
Erikajo chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Wow...speechless :)
hermionerox89 chapter 4 . 11/5/2010
this is pretty good, please write more
kayla chapter 4 . 11/5/2010
Plz upate soon! im addicted to your story.
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