It’s a great story and please continue the story

I hate the stupid of Naruto

I thought I was going to fight, in fact, I just became a stupid sage frog ... not running a mission and not saving Obito ... you idiot ...

I just read this whole thing in one sitting and I’m completely enraptured. I love the concept and the execution is great too. And even crazier? Tomorrow is this fic’s tenth anniversary!

How can they capture Madara/Obito if Obito is good?

I have to say it made sense that Kakashi would reject Kabushi. As much as I kind of enjoy the story, there were part which are not answered and were cringy. May be you left them out because you did not know yet how to answer them.

There was something That put me off about Kabushi,Naruto, young Kakashi and Obito. But I guess we do not see that characters the same way which is understandable.

Kabushi seems to make promises he is not even sure he would keep. Also how can he promise to train Obito, give Naruto a family when his sharingan is still present? Is he not going to go to his time? I find it strange that Naruto does not care much about seeing his friends again. His Sasuke. He would never be friend with the Sasuke of this time since he would be 15 years older than him. Kabushi also has taken Obito as his responsibility not even caring the slightest about his younger self. I find it strange considering the fact that he wanted to remove the pain from his heart which he failed so far. If anything he added to the boy hatred.

I could not find in this story the original Kakashi that I love in the manga and anime. This one is selfish more than anything else and had no warmth. He cared more about fixing his mistakes to make himself feel better not caring about the consequences in the big Picture. Also he viewed Obito as too perfect Shinobi and fearless and his young self as stupid, coward and a failure. I really doubt Kakashi did see himself as such - It is like he is not proud of all he has accomplish in his life- and Rin well he did not care about her at all.

Regardless I would have liked to know the end of the story since I read it.
All in all good work and thank you for the story.

Nice chapter. Very interesting.

One of the death which affected Kakashi the most n the Naruto serie was Rin's. I do find it strange that he does not even once worry about her at all in this story. It would have been nice if you showed us that he cared about her. She was his friend as well in the manga andnher mourned her but here Kakashi is indifferent to her which is young Kakashi was bit at all. I find it sad that you changed Kakashi personality.

I still do not get why Kakashi and Naruto want to save this reality when their own is still not safe. Kakashi still got the sharingan so it means that Obito of his time still does die. What is not clear if this time is still their there this young Obito will still die.

LOL you do seem to dislike young Kakashi. I feels at times as if I am reading young Kakashi bashing and Obito worshiping . I do not mind but considering the fact that It come up in every chapter, it is kind of annoying. I really find it strange that Kakashi who knows what he has been going through and why he changed and behaved that way is his teens is now belittling his young self and worship young Obito. Especially considering the fact that adult Kakashi is no better than young Kakashi.

I really enjoyed Hiruzen and Kabushi chat in the hospital.

LOL Obito would have saved Minato And Kushina? Really Kakashi is not thinking straight that's for sure.

I like very much how he is thinking about Madara sharingan having the same ability as his and Obito.

So since Minato team are all fine then, they are not Kakashi original team. I find it strange that Kakashi is not even remotely thinking about going back to his time and his duties to his Konoha. This is something I am having a hard time to believe even for the sake of the story. Upsetting the time line is not something Kakashi would do though. He is too smart to do that.

Anyway the story is to be honest interesting and enjoyable.

Nice chapters.

Their plan of wanting to fix everything is good but I am surprised that someone as ntelligent as Kakashi is not seeing the bigger picture. It is not just about Orochimaru and Danzou. What about people who that would be affected by their actions in a negative way. They are really thinking to simply. This is something I can accept from Naruto but not from Kakashi. This Kakashi is a little to stupid.
Even if this Si another time line and not their one. They just cannont make it all better.

Since they changed the event , shouldn't Kabushi have his normal eyes? Actually should he not have disappeared since he does not exist any more?

This does not make sense to me really.

What I do not get is ŵhy Kakshi wants to change the past. Does he not care about their own life in the futur? What about the file or those indeiredtly connected to those events of the past?

He has asked Naruto not to do anything which could change or affect the futur but he does not do the same. He is not stable at all emotionally. I am kind of disappointed in him though.

Tbh this is the BEST time travel reveal I've ever read! I love this TO BITS! Can't wait to see how thr timelines merged

is this story abandoned? I've been waiting for the moment where theybsay that they're from the future and it would be a shame for the story to end there.

This is great!

OMGGGG THIS IS THE BEST TIME TRAVEL NARUTO AU I'VE EVER READDDD PLEASE TELL ME THIS IS NOT THE END

This fanfic is just.. l.
I really Hope you update Soon! I'm curious to see what would happen Soon! And your writing is also amazing!