Ooooh i get so this is 16 year old canon version of naruto but 20 years younger in mind. i see now

i really really really fucking hate the canon version of naruto. fucking hell how i fucking despise him

I am starving for that story! I adore it!

Update please

Thanks for the hard work love the story _
Please don't drop _

It’s finally happened

Me encanta ,creo que es la segunda vez que la leo pero nunca pierde el encanto XD

Great story! Can't wait for the next update!

Beautiful

Epic

read through all chapters in one night please update it is getting so good please continue I would love it thanks

Oooh this is a good one, I hope you continue it! The idea of two people going back in time instead of one is kinda refreshing! Really enjoyed it :) the way you went about a lot of decisions and the way people found out stuff was cool. Like everyone finding out Narutos real full name when the fox was trying to take over, and Hiruzen confirming Kakashi's real identity while he was still drowsy and confused. Clever!
Hoping for more?

Ohhh, this gave me CHILLS! I was so excited to read it! You're such an excellent writer, you're such an incredible writer! I enjoyed a lot! Thank you!

It took me a while, a few hours to get thru the story to this chapter, I might add, but this was a very interesting read. Even though I have read similar plotted stories, I admit that this was one of the best that I've read in a long time.

The levels of detail your had added into this story shows how well you've followed the original series. Not everyone remembers every minute detail, especially while writing a story, most often are too lazy to double check their information.

Its very true that no matter how you tip toe around it that eventually Naruto and Kakashi would have been found out. I'm surprised Itatchi hasn't been mentioned at all so far though, or even who Madara actually is. Have you reached that part yet- or are you attempting to avoid spoilers? You mentioned something in the story but never actually make the actual statement- that Madara, or Tobi, isn't who he says he is. You merely skimmed over that detail..

I also want to bring up that chapter regarding Obito finding Kabushi in the woods- that was a stroke of genius! Very well written. It makes sense that the eye would seek out its owner in its own way. Most never mention how both Kakashi and Obito are able to share an image, seeing as both have one eye each. You did a wonderful job introducing this fact in this story and did an amazing job with your pacing throughout the story. One can tell you've paid attention to the entire series.

One fact bugs me though, Naruto was older than 15, though when Tobi made his appearance I think. He was 16 I think, if I recall correctly, when he took out Pains six paths, during the invasion in the village. The only other issue I had was when Naruto and Kakashi had been found in the beginning. You never described what either of them would've been wearing. Especially Kakashi's typical attire.

moving on, to my original point.

As you mentioned before no two sharingon are alike, and its interesting how you chose to go into detail regarding how special Obito's sharingon is. ITs intesting that Obito didn't push when Kabushi attempted to explain what he had seen, im surprised he hadn't made the connection till this chapter.

I am in awe of what that particular chapter entailed, regarding the shared vison, and how Obito had been drawn to where the older Kakashi had been in the woods. This level of detail, it truly was well written, I enjoyed how this scene nearly mirrored what had occurred in the Manga. Where, Obito had later admitted to being there when Rin had died. That's where this concept of shared visuals had first been mentioned. Its fascinating. I could actually see it in my head as I read through what you wrote.

When you mentioned Obito's sharingon again, when he confronted the younger counterpart, I was deeply impressed with the level of creativity of both this scene and the one mentioned in a previous chapter. I do hope you do manage to finish this story or at least upload another chapter soon. Despite how long this story is, I applaud your self control as a writer, its never easy not to want to rush a reveal. I'm also very impressed with your attention to the details from the original series. Its hard to recall all these terms, or even the spellings, I know I struggle myself.. You should be very proud of what you've written so far.

I hope you continue this story!