Reviews for Above And Beyond
OriginalPippie chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
I agree with the other reviewer. This could be a real good story if expanded. You have a good idea here but it really needs to be fleshed out to be a full story. There's so much more you could do for it. Such as, explore Horshack getting sick in the first place and finding out it's cancer. Show Mr. Kotter and the other student's reactions to the news. Also explain about how he needs the bone marrow transplant and someone needs to be a match. Maybe have the other sweathogs decide to be tested. Perhaps the sweathogs and Mr. Kotter get tested together and they find out Mr. Kotter is the only match. Then go in deeper with them going through the marrow transplant. There are so many things you can include to improve this story. It has so much potential.
Forgot to add correct spelling chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Its Horshack. Thats wut made me add that u might not no the show well.
This cant be finished yet chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Please say it isn't finished! this is like an expanded summary. u explain the problem but it deserves a real story. if you have trouble expanding you can always get a beta to help. i no it can be hard to put a long plot together. Of course if you dont know the show well then yeah i guess i see why u left it at this.