Reviews for Before the storm
whatever chapter 5 . 8/29/2011
should have warned it was a death fic I would not have read. an it was not worth my time any ways chapters to short not enough detail.
Stompy Bigfoot chapter 4 . 9/2/2010
reid is gonna die... ?
PinkHimeLacus chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
No please, happy ending please! Thanks for sharing -.
lolyncut chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I agree with comment #1. Separate the paragraphs or no one is going to be able to read your story. It could be the greatest unread story ever.
2amWritersClub chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I think this has potential but I have a suggestion. You need to create paragraphs and separate lines for dialog for each character. Reading solid blocks of text like this is just too hard to read and differentiate and leads the reader to give up which is a shame. Hope this is constructive!