Reviews for Before the Sun Breaks Another Day
KilgharrahPendragon chapter 17 . 10/3/2014
Another fantastic story! So well written, you guys did a great job!
20000 WPM chapter 13 . 8/5/2014
I am glad that her love for Leon is giving her a change of heart . I think she may soon see her sister has a side to her that Morgana was not aware .
20000 WPM chapter 6 . 8/5/2014
Poor Morgana . No idea that her plan is doomed to failure because the man she is trying to seduce is really her father . Poor merlin and Arthur both feeling so much and not handling it very well. Arthur's comment about the trees being out to get merlin was hilarious.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/25/2014
Bravo!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/25/2014
Very powerful scene between arthur and merlin at the end.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/25/2014
Amazing confrontation between the two sisters. Very in-depth.
Epic 'official' magic reveal. Poignant at the end of the chapter.
Absolutely fantastic chapter.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/24/2014
Alright. I think we're establishing that Morgana stayed evil in the show because she was missing a love interest. Frustrated and lonely.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
I like the direction you've taken Merlin and Morgana's characters in. They're more mature and plausible.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/24/2014
Btw you left a few proofreading indicators in there.

Great chapter.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/24/2014
I love the wit and sarcasm in some of your writing. Very enjoyable.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/24/2014
Love your use of metaphors. Well composed and imaginative.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
Excellent writing.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/21/2014
Love it. So much! Do more!
Guest chapter 17 . 1/8/2014
This was wonderful in every way. You had Morgana save herself believably. Thank you.
cindy4651 chapter 8 . 1/6/2014
This is very good. I'm really enjoying it, and you have very good phrasing in your descriptions.
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