Reviews for The Iron Prince
Gothalla123 chapter 14 . 7/4/2013
YAY! I'M SO EXCITED! This story is one of the best I have ever read!
Texara chapter 14 . 5/25/2011
Nice story!

Really sweet, i love the way you describe both Gamma and Gwendoline!

This is also my new favorite Bioshock OC pairing! _
Honeyfish chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Isn't it kind of an important point that ADAM slugs cannot be implanted in adults because ADAM has a degenerative effect on them? That's what happened to Gil, after all, and we all saw how well that turned out.
Hammer and Anvil chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
Oh snap! sequel! So Eleanor knows of Gamma and Gwen? Gwen must have been of some great importance for her to know. Now when I hear "Maiden of Steel" I think of Big Sisters immediatley, which must meen Gwen possibly had something to do with them. Who knows. But dear author, please, if you include Big Sisters in the sequel then dont automatically mark them as a reaccuring enemy. You need to remember that they just really hate Delta only because he never called them back the day after he dates one of them for the first time. lol. What i'm saying is to keep the Big Sisters neutral or allied. It will make the story more fun. Good luck.
Lost Blonde chapter 14 . 12/7/2010
WOOHoO! I'm so excited for the new one!
scrin99 chapter 14 . 12/7/2010
Freakin' cliffhanger...
scrin99 chapter 13 . 12/7/2010
I gotta say, I've been loving this Story!
scrin99 chapter 12 . 12/7/2010
The devil starts to rear its ugly head.
scrin99 chapter 11 . 12/7/2010
Oh, gawd! It burns! I didn't see anything! Nothing at all! There's no men in those suits, they're just monsters who protect creepy little girls!
Hammer and Anvil chapter 12 . 12/6/2010
Man, this was a sad chapter. I call for a plot twist! As soon as Gwens family arrive to a bathesphere to leave rapture for good, they are confronted by Ryan, who doesn't want anyone to leave because he is paranoid of people on the surface finding out about his city. Tons of action ensues, Gamma protects the family while they try to survive, blah blah blah. Please dont let this story die so soon! That was one of my greatest fears! Good job on the story though. Keeps me all tensed and wondering on what will happen next! Take your time! thanks!
scrin99 chapter 10 . 12/6/2010
So now we see the man in the iron mask.
scrin99 chapter 9 . 12/6/2010
I wonder if we get a glimpse at you-know-who...oh, wait. Too early. Damn.
scrin99 chapter 8 . 12/6/2010
Yay, more bonding!

Btw, never mind my last question.
scrin99 chapter 7 . 12/6/2010
So do we all return to the earth.
scrin99 chapter 6 . 12/6/2010
I sense a disturbance in the force...

Ya think that would be cliche by now, but you can't beat the classics!
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