|Reviews for Nidaime Rikudo Sennin vs The Avatar|
| 1066wthec chapter 3 . 1/27
storys really good and coming together
| Ndasuunye chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
The main problem I am having with this fic is two folded. One is the romance. You could have done this in so many ways, it's not even funny, but instead, you chose for Naruto to be stupid beyond belief and ignore the fact that no matter how fanatic these people of the 4 nations are, they have justible cause especially since the Fire Nation deliberately started war with the world and yet he has no care about that. Instead he focuses on Aang's ego, which is FAR FAR FAR off from what you described him to be. You're selectiveness is just aweful. It's ok that the Fire Nation is destroying the world. I won't be hard on Azula for blindly not having a mind of her fucking own. As long as I can get her to love me without having a daddy complex and Aang doesn't become an egotist.
I know you're gonna mention Aang's little show off stints for the girls and boys he meets along the way, but as a kid he's prone to do that. Moreso when he's simply trying to impress a single girl Katara. If he wasn't interest in katara like that, I'm sure as hell he wouldn't be as much as a showoff as he is. He's more of a goofball who likes to have fun and doesn't want to deal with the pressure of becoming the Avatar which he openly admits. No hints of egotism there champ. Alright, so we established that boys show off for girls. After all, I can see it with naruto. He's done it plenty times for Sakura and he just did it for Azula (though when he said he still got it, I don't EVER remember him having it, but it's fanfiction and the fact that he's 17 and knows so much advance chakra manipulation, I'll give canon change a pass). But with the rinnegan, able to willingly summon beings from a whole different UNIVERSE, and apparently he so called "intelligence" he refuses to acknowledge with such gaping holes in these techniques, that maybe there is such a way to bring him home. Sure it won't be easy, but he has the fucking rinnegan and I'm still skeptical that with all his "years" of training, he didn't learn a single damn seal technique. His father was a seal master and so was his godfather. What the hell man.
I'm sorry to say even as powerful and "cool" as Naruto is, his quick acceptance of not going back to konoha is a poor way for him to get with a girl. I'd recommend you read this story "So Close Yet So Far" by apollyon1991; chapter 3. That could give you a good basis on what I mean when I say loopholes in summoning jutsu and perhaps if you really want him stuck there, a more plausible excuse why then just having, never give up Naruto...give up. That's my review and my take on it. Good luck with the rest your whatever this is.
| Samurox chapter 3 . 12/6/2013
This is a great story don't give up on it.
| jirote chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
1 have rinnegan and container of jubbi why not godlike?
2 if can summon toad can go mount myōboku to home is easy why think no way to home?
| Nightmare daniell61 chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
nice and all but fucking update please!
| KamiNaruto chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
| firehelm chapter 3 . 10/17/2013
dang! This is a good fic. Its been far too long since ive read one like this. xD
You have my thanks.
I would like to request something:
| Cookie16Monster chapter 3 . 10/9/2013
Is thid story on hold or stopped completely?
| aznxa21 chapter 3 . 9/21/2013
Shame you aren't working on this anymore it was a very interesting story.
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/17/2013
this is awesome ne
| TheViewer chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
great story very interesting i hope to see more soon because it is developing really well
| KitsuneDragon chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
love this story. I read through all 3 chapters without stopping. I hope you continue this soon. I like the realistic view you put on the Avatar world as you aim to remove Aang's naivety to the world and war.
| saashi samy chapter 3 . 8/13/2013
| saashi samy chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
| NyaNyaKittyFace chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
Still waiting on that rewrite/update. Not that it's needed the story is perfect. I mean seriously GODLIKE NARUTO what more could a girl ask for?