Reviews for Nidaime Rikudo Sennin vs The Avatar
Mac-man3779 chapter 1 . 10/4
Dude you realize that Azula is the bad guy in avatar, correct?
Wicked.A chapter 1 . 6/11
why does toph put her hands in front of her phase in chapter 1? she is blind
Guest chapter 3 . 12/31/2016
Really like it. Can't wait for more
Stratos263 chapter 3 . 12/28/2016
Good luck naruto
Stratos263 chapter 2 . 12/28/2016
Yeah avatar you lose
Stratos263 chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
Good start
Scarease chapter 3 . 11/28/2016
interesting read.
Scarease chapter 2 . 11/28/2016
One of my Oc"s would love the Spirit of knowledge see as a other being that understand the importance of presserving knowledge and keeping dangerous knowledge out of the hand of those that would abuse it .
Scarease chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
Sound to me that the Avatar is the World Failsafe used when chaos reach to the bad point that ,When a major threat pops up especial since the wolf is more into with the spiritual Aspect of the can be achieved for a time but most also be defended Vigilantly Against threat both inside and out .Plus Naruto should not be so quick to Jump to conclusion this world has developed a mean to maintain it self when threat to balance pop become a grey character bit out of is character do to fact that he almost alway follows a good path from not killing ,to save the Wave ,hell is nations as a hokage ,Hell he himself made world peace not including what happened in the garden all depend on developing the right system that purges it self of corruption ,is written clear understandable with no real loop holes ,Profitable for each nation ,If everybody has wealth to survive most people will be content all that need is to insure that few sociopaths , corruption does not build and gain power .example are several of country have a almost zero crime rate ,have never played a part in the all the wars we have had ,no poverty rate .It get the people past they current Social Cultures and right systems down .yes they will be those that are a threat and need like to be removed form existence but if you have right education and Social moral System in place lot of are current world problems will disappear.
Bloodzone15 chapter 3 . 11/17/2016
Great work can't wait for the next chapter
Guest chapter 3 . 9/1/2016
Hate it when people flame if you don't like then don't read I'm tired of people saying the stories people make are crap
Azula Targaryen chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
it's boring
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
... You used a childish way of explaining how the elements exist with naruto to Azula.. I'm gone. I'm not reading crap made by a six year old. And no if you didn't get the hint I'm not calling you a child I'm saying you have no grammar or vocabulary skills. Terrible..
demiread chapter 3 . 5/28/2016
this is EPIC you are really good at this
Seal-Sama chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
Hmmm, If you have no time to write any more, why not find a suitable author to continue this...Its only 3 chapters so its not a train smash for another author to continue...Abandoning this for like two years really doesn't prduce a good image for you, and for future story's you MIGHT create.

However, If you dead, god bless your soul, and ignore everything I said...

The last line was a joke or sarcasm, I was serious.
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