Reviews for She Belongs To Me
Deathknight999 chapter 11 . 7/18
Hey bunjie is was wondering whats up with this story since its been a few years.
Morgrim342 chapter 9 . 5/5
okay! in the last chapter how could neji use shadow clones? surely he wouldn't have enough chakra to make one or two AND still fight with the jyuuken!
venom90 chapter 11 . 2/10
i'm usually not a fan a futa on male...but hey, it's tayuya and i'm happy with her being in the story.
Reishin Amara chapter 11 . 11/15/2014
Gosh...do u still update anymore?
Dark Lord Shawn chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
You are a badass plain and simple
CoG chapter 5 . 8/17/2014
lemon was too short you should have made them change roles more... and why is naruto always acting like a sisy with futas!... at least you didnt give her the donkey cock... I give 8.5 out of 10
Guest chapter 2 . 7/28/2014
Please make more of these their the only things keeping me from killing myself and they also get me
Wet
nicholas.souddress chapter 11 . 7/7/2014
Hay man/chick keep up the good work
Shinzochi chapter 8 . 7/2/2014
i love this story and i am looking forward to reading more
PugTheMagician chapter 11 . 5/23/2014
i have to say, i'm impressed with this story. i rarely read futa stories, not because i am against them but trather because i can never find any good ones. you however have made a VERY good one. i like how you made tayuya in the story, still in keeping with her forceful and foul mouthed ways in the anime and still able to have a loving relationship. the lemons so far have been quite good, not overly long or informative, just the right length. they also have a certain creativity to them i enjoy. i like how you have set up the story, allowing for naruto's growth in dfferent from canon ways and yet still not screw with the overall plot. i hope that you are alright in relation to your apparent suicidal thoughts and that you are getting propper help for it. i look forward to continue reading this story. good luck
Shamus chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
You have some ebonics style grammar going on that makes it very difficult for me to follow along. I mean, I know what you're TRYING to say, but it's kinda like trying to listen to a bad stutterer... It totally takes me out of the moment. It probably has to do with where you were raised, so I can forgive it, but still, you should try to work on it. Maybe you should get a tutor or something...
Guest chapter 4 . 2/17/2014
T_T i think ima gonna stop read this story know im scarred for life of read this but to the author good story but a bit weird for me but keep on going with the story bro...
Guest chapter 3 . 2/17/2014
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS ITS WEIRD AS HELL THIS IS A SICK STORY...but it is kinda little bit intresting thou...
kazearashika chapter 11 . 2/12/2014
I feel for ya dude this happens to a lot of writers but if people try to take your stuff call em out
Guest chapter 9 . 2/6/2014
how did naruto get the toad contract if pervy-sage never teaches him
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