Reading this story for like the fifth or sixth time now. I think of this story as my happy place. You are seriously such an amazing writer. This is not only my favorite fan fiction, but my favorite piece of writing. I wish I could read more of your stories.

Lord I thought Ed was gone. I was going to stop reading.

Please finish the story

Is there a final chapter?

There has been no update on the last chapter since 2016, I hope you're alive and well. I love the complexity and truthfulness between your characters, I love how raw and close to the real Bella and Edward are. I"d love to know how their ending was. Is there really a baby? Is there a Cullen baby?

I read this fanfiction a few months ago when I first started to read fanfiction. Now I’ve probably read hundreds of fanfictions and this will always be my most favorite. This is just so well written, it compares to no other. I’m so sad you aren’t writing anymore. I would pay to read more of your stories. I’ve reread this multiple times at this point even though I know what’s coming. I literally laugh out loud reading this. Spoiler: The first time I read this I disliked Alice’s character, but reading it multiple times, I can understand her character more and how it added to the story. Like how would you feel if your best friend completely changed on you overnight? Then finding out that your best friend basically pimped herself out to your pretentious brother for money. I wish there was redemption for Alice. Maybe there would’ve been if the story was completed but I can also see how Bella sees their relationship as too far gone.

I generally never read very long unfinished stories; I almost stopped once or twice; but the character developments are written so realistically that I had to know; and nothing is too much, no endless descriptions of places, no useless introspection, everything serves the purpose; I think what shocks me the most is your ability to embrace absolutely all aspects of life as a couple, especially when it comes to inviting a baby into it. Edward's point of view is so right, and few people anticipate it before starting: a child changes everything the couple has built together, especially this one. Their love is so unique, exclusive, that bringing in a third person, even one conceived by this love, is almost too much; and Bella's desire is so common sense, to create for love! I don't know if you have studied couples psychology, but as a reader writes below, this story should be put in the hands of any couple preparing to exchange eternal vows. I'll stop there, I could write so much more! thank you for this trip, hoping you happy.

I read this story for the first time when I was 16. I remember the weekly updates. I read along that entire time. I truely hope Jenna sees this and finishes this story. Your writing deserves the conclusion.

Love this story !

Wow. What a fucking ride! This story will probably be one of my all time favorite fanfics EVER. I can see myself re-reading this over and over and enjoying every second of it. The progression of their relationship and the character development of Edward and Bella were just so impressive and very well written. It doesn’t even matter that the story is not completely finished. It still ended on a good note and for that I am grateful. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful words and this wonderful story. I hope you continue writing because you are truly gifted. Wishing you all the best.

i literally started reading this story as a 15 year old and now im 28 and the amount of times i come back to this is a testament to your writing. i hope you're well. thank you for giving us this beautiful journey.

I really love how this story starts off, how Bella has no filter and Edward is arrogant. I love how their relationship develops and they don’t fall in love after one week. The transition of Edward calling her Bella instead of Isabella happens so discreetly that I didn’t notice until chapters after. No other fan fiction compares to this. The only thing that I dislike is Alice’s character. Alice is more like a Victoria or Jane. She ruined her relationship with Jasper, her career, and got involved in a crime. Then the reasoning behind it is mental health issues which weren’t addressed.

This is by far my absolute favorite twilight fanfiction. I’m not even upset that it wasn’t completely finished. Thank you.

I think I've read this for the umpteenth time, but the feelings it gives feels like I am reading it just for the first time. I don't want this to end. I want more chapters, sorry for being greedy but this is just so good.
This is allowing me to move forward, to forget the feeling of being left behind by the person I've planned my future with. Again, thank you for sharing this story. You don't know how you just saved me.

I binged rereading this story again and I just don't know what to do now! I remember the first time I picked it up and I was messaging you on Facebook all of my feelings and ugly sobbing and messaging you how beautiful this story is. You would reply to me with your own thoughts and would tell me how fast of a reader I am lol. I just couldn't put it down, obviously. I love them so much and they'll always hold a special place in my heart. I hope to one day see you finish this masterpiece. I hope you're doing ok JennaIvy