Reviews for Transition
impeccablesin chapter 31 . 3/3/2020
Since you have it as one of your favorites, you should really write a Terra/Jinx story as there really aren't any at all.
Guest chapter 27 . 12/14/2019
i really really love your idea here with jinx manipulating the odds of them not actually dying and raven healing the wounds as a means of effectively raising the dead but not actual breaking the laws of the universe so bluntly its so awesome, plus i love the idea of probability manipulating powers anyway and thats just such an awesome unique use of them so i applaud you for that.
Geist837 chapter 9 . 10/24/2019
For the disclaimer of this chapter, just remember GoTo is evil.
Guest chapter 31 . 4/3/2019
loved this story, and the idea of a psycho-manticore Beast boy loose on apokalipse somewhere sounds like an awesome side-story
Guest chapter 31 . 3/31/2019
Pretty good story. Couple of dangling plot threads, like what happened to Beast Boy and the shuttles, plus an interesting sequel could come up with how the world changes with K'Naa and her heralds around.

There's not just Darkseid who could cause them problems, and K'Naa is still a huge distance from her girls...
Elysian17 chapter 31 . 3/11/2018
i really like your story. It is well thought out and Pretty Rad.
Author Of Purpose chapter 15 . 9/3/2017
So when exactly Did Darkfire take over? I'm not sure I've seen that anywhere other than this story. Also how are things.
Author Of Purpose chapter 14 . 7/27/2017
God, I love how you handle gar in this! It makes me think about so many ideas in literature and society that I normally wouldn't think about and I'm so glad that I am thinking about them. But I'm surprised you went with Darkseid as your choice for the villain of the story. He's honestly never been that interesting of a villain to me cause he was one of the most gentrified archetypes that still gets overused to this day!
But I still look forward to seeing what you do with him.

PEACE
Author Of Purpose chapter 11 . 7/13/2017
Okay I just got to say this: I was always under the impression that Ravens mothers was a priestess of the order of Azarath and that was why they raided her rather than just killing her. Please correct me if I'm wrong.
Author Of Purpose chapter 10 . 7/9/2017
That bit at the end with Robin praying for Starfire was beautiful. I'm finding myself tearing up as I write this review.
Author Of Purpose chapter 9 . 7/7/2017
There must be visions of jinx's parents suffering in hell for what they did to her. Subjecting anyone to such treatment for any reason should be punishable by a life time supply of fear toxin.
TacoKing23 chapter 31 . 4/16/2017
I ended up liking this story a lot. Admittedly, there were parts I found more than a little strange, but strange isn't necessarily a bad thing. I think my biggest issue with it is that I want more of it. For example: What happened to Beast Boy and the survivors of Darkseid's ship? Do the other visitors to K'Naa also become beings like unto gods? How do things on Earth change as time goes on? This story has opened up possibilities for many more, and I sincerely hope you do something with them.
TacoKing23 chapter 17 . 4/16/2017
Okay, now it's gone from "What the fuck?!" to "Okay, well, at least there is an explanation for it." Still very odd.
TacoKing23 chapter 1 . 4/15/2017
Well, this went from zero to "What the fuck?!" REEEEAAL quick.
Flufflepuff123 chapter 31 . 2/22/2017
I really liked your story, i hope you make a sequel. There were many unresolved plotlines i would like to see to their conclusion. For one thing i wanted to see what kind of mess Crazy Beastboy does on Apokolips, i was thinking by the time Raven, Jinx and the Justice League get there he will have taken over and trying to get back at Raven. Secondly, i thought it would be funny if Raven decided the best way to deal with Terras issues is to send her to K'naa, i mean one can control earth and stone, the other is mostly earth and stone so i would like to see where that goes. Lastly, the whole situation with Blackfire ruling Tamaran. It would be interesting if the Titans kidnapped her and sent her to K'naa to resocialize her.
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