Reviews for And In Your Touch I Feel Myself
Bones2014 chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Ya, it came so close to this on the show... So many missed opportunities in season 5 that could have salvaged season 6...
bearlee-there chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
"She moved closer, realizing at last that she wouldn't be turned away. That he would never let her down. That she would be safe with him. She'd protected her heart for so long, but it was time for her to trust again. Instead of wanting to run, the knowledge propelled her that last tiny inch to him." THIS. Well said, Heather.

"She held his hand to her heart, looking up at him with everything she felt." Reminiscent of "Mayhem on a Cross." Niiiiice.

"She closed her tear-filled eyes and let herself feel like crystal." Brilliantly beautiful. (Get it?) No really. You do have such a beautiful way with words that it makes me weep.

This one made me all warm and melty, bb. Thanks!
horseninja chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
That was good. Wish that had happened...
Alicat76 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Oh my goodness... wow! That was a stunning piece of writing! Brennan might not be the only one crying now. You conveyed how much they mean to each other so beautifully. If only the actual episode had finished like this :) x
laffers18 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Gryphin chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
This was such a missed moment for them in the show! I wanted to just scream when they got interrupted by everyone because it was SO. GOING. TO. HAPPEN. I'm super happy that you took this moment on, and that you brought me back to it and the magical feel of it all.

Your opening analogy of a far away explosion is sooo perfect! I love it! It's like your body can pick it up, can feel it, but you can't hear it and you can't put your finger on what exactly has happened.

You crafted a beautiful moment for me! Thank you!
BandBfan chapter 1 . 8/23/2010

Oh, so wonderfully written. The emotion and feelings felt here are very palpable and so very real. Just amazing! Thank you for putting the kind of ending to this beautiful scene that it has always deserved.

Do you think you will continue this?

thanks again,

pkmoise chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
That was really good! So beautifully descriptive and emotionally evoking.
dabhug chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Oh, if only...

Beautiful, as always. It's good to see your words!
MK chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
This is SO wonderful. Very sweet, emotional and loving. I adore it, and thank you for sharing with us!
Aching Bones chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Hi there,

Oh wow! This was truly beautiful and so well written...I just wish that it had played out like this on the tv itself...You wrote it just like we saw it but for the kiss itself...It was tentative, gentle and sensual all in one!

'The only air she needed was his. The only heart she needed was his'...

You are making my little heart swoon with the possibilities for these two...thank you...

mumrulz chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
This is definately a case of 'actions speak louder than words'.

You/they were able to convey so much with just the smallest touches.

A beautiful & tender moment between them. :-):-):-)
jhi1005 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
That was so beautifully written, it was like reading poetry.

Now please let the writers at Bones take a hint already and make this a reality!
daffodil7511 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
That's so lovely. Thank you, it eased the angst that the wait for September has been generating. :)
aadams00 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
*sigh* That's how it should have happened! Thanks for that POV!