|Reviews for Three Times Better Together|
| Steelrush chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
Sorry about my previous review,please delete it! :(
| Steelrush chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
A review from the savage head eater:
The concept of Cayomi got my interest...and although I haven't read the chapters after this, I think the idea of Cayomi going through an adventure like Sora's (with Donald and Goofy) wouldn't be that good of an idea...
...I suggest that you make her go on her own kind of quest, like having Cayomi explore her own planet, instead of jumping around the worlds of the Disney characters.
I know this is a Kingdom Hearts fanfic, but that's my opinion.
Still, the introduction of Kairi having a sister was a good idea I think.