|Reviews for Souji's fortune|
| mochiusagi chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
awww that was cute.
| FINISHED-WITH-THIS-ACCOUNT chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
A lovely fanfic.
All I want to say is continue this fanfic, I know it'll be a good one that I'll enjoy reading if you continue. Your spelling is good and so is your grammer, but it'll get better as you continue to write, as they say 'practice makes perfect' so don't worry as this IS your first fanfic.
Hope you continue!
| Have a Little Feith chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
you should definitely continue. If you need help with spelling, Mail me, and make a connection with me and I'll help you out. I'll be your beta if you do that. In case you don't know, a beta is someone who helps with spelling, grammar, and general ideas.
| Dragoon Swordsman chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Quite a good fic for a beginner. A bit awkward in places, but again, it's your first story, so some issues are inevitable. Grammar is good for the most part, spelling ditto. Definitely continue; you're showing promise.