Reviews for Mania
JaneAberny chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
Freakin wow. This is so poetic, i dont think you know how incredibly beautiful you wrote this. It can't even be described. I LOVVVE writing more than anything in this world. Almost beats how much I love Marik:) Marik. Marik. Marik. He's such an incredible character. And so is Bakura. You showed both of their stories and personalities so well in this short, but beautiful fanfic.
Until June begins chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
And i forgot to say this the last time i posted, but-

i really like how you put Marik as flame and Bakura as ash because Marik is all color and Bakura is so monochrome (supposedly). i don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but i suppose i'll never know.

sorry if this doesn't make sense. it's taht time of the day when i'm about as eloquent as a spoon.
Until June begins chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Goddam! why do i love you so much? let me count the reasons. oh wait, i can't.

they're fucking innumerable.

all i can say is, write a damn book already. i'd buy a hundred copies so you could be rich and show them to my friends and brag that i knew about you when you were still on fanfiction.

hipster douchebag? yeh!
SugarAndSanctimony chapter 2 . 2/22/2011
This is so very, very powerful. The words are blunt and evocative, strung together in harsh, choppy sentences that suggest something deep and intense underneath all the staccato rhythm. Every sentence tears. Deliciously cynical, and brutally heartbreaking.
looptheloopy chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Woah... This is amazing o.o
Fictatious chapter 2 . 2/2/2011
Oooh, I really love the last line there, kind of a wishing he could die. Delicious shivers for this fic.
JazzBFabulous chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
DEEEP! possibly a candidate for the best thief shipping fanfiction 3 ;)
neverbirds chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
"It's like music to my fucking ears, I swear to the Gods. Better than the crack of bones breaking and the slrrp of organs squishing around inside the rotting cage of a corpse. Better than the sweet, hot, noise of flesh on flesh and the harder faster more—oh."


You know how much I love ~insane~ Marik. And God, did you deliver with this. And I adore your Bakura in this - I don't know, he comes across as more indifferent than a sap. And it's my opinion Bakura cares more than he lets on anyway 8D

Also, this is going to sound weird, but I love the lack of dialogue. I know it's because you don't like writing it, but I don't know, it kind of creates this sense of well, they don't really need words.

And Bakura calling him 'little Malik'? Unf. Gorgeous.

I would leave a longer, more detailed review, but I've been without the internet for like, ten days and I've had to sneak on at college so I don't have much time :')

But, in short: I loved this. You are a genius. Please write professionally, because I would buy every single one and they'd have a special shelf all to themselves and it would be glorious.
Seren147 chapter 2 . 12/6/2010
Really liked this. Both of these chapters - I thought you captured the psyche of each character quite well. This type of relationship is more realistic than a sappy one, of course, and I like to see them both in character, consumed by their hate (Malik) and in a sense hopeless (Bakura). Anyway, well done, I shall be on the look-out for more stuff from you in the future!
Angael chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
Ahhhh! I love this. I love youuu!

Pptttsch. I like your pansy Bakura. Compared to how I write him he's like a macho man! The part about Mariks laugh was all too adorable - you know I adored stuff like that. I had to go and reread the first chapter to make sure I knew what the story was about! I'm so glad you finished it... It's only like the best sadomasochistic sexy firey thing ever! I love Bakura telling Malik lies. I'm not sure I would be able to appreciate it as much if Malik believed such lies, so I'm oh so glad you made it clear that although he's sick in the head he's fawkin crazy at the same time! (there's a difference, I say!) Malik knowing that Bakuras lying but wanting him to be telling the truth in that angry way of his... Oooh! So sexy, I love it. (:

And matches? Bbxpphnebzlqbeix. Matches! Enough said. x3

Fantastic, as always, dearie! Go make millions and publish a book, then write me a check. :D ahahaha.
xBrokendollx chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
I really like this fic.

And Marik is so IC (just the way I like it)
scrambled-eggs-at-midnight chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Holy mother of poptarts, that was creepy. I could practically feel my eyes getting rounder and rounder as I read this. And it was so freaking good! I swear, you have that "creepy f*cking shit" thing down pat. And the description you used was just gorgeous. If you don't write the next part I will... I will... uh... I will carry out this threat! Yes! So write more. Er, please?
Natsu.Arisu chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I like them this way too, don't worry. ;)

I freaking love this. The first sentence: "I will set this fucking bed on fire." So simple, but it catches my attention. I love how you followed it up with several "I will" statements. The sort of makes it like a promise. A promise that Malik will burn Bakura as he should in Hell.

Also, the fact that Bakura reminds him so much of his father - wow. When I read it through the first time, my eyes somehow skipped over that. But I went back and saw that, I never realized how true that is. And I love how Malik says Bakura will die by his hands, just as his father did. The text in parenthesis before saying that - "nonono, it was my dark half...It was the wasn't me..." - Was it a sense of doubt? Or maybe the small voice in his head saying that, yet Malik says otherwise, 'No, my dark half and I are the same person - therefore I killed my father, and I will do the same to Bakura. Both of these dirty bastards will die by my hands.'...I dunno, you're the writer, not me. ;)

Oh, and I loved when Malik compared Bakura's white hair and skin to a straight jacket, walls of an asylum, etc. and then went into describing how he'd burn him down to ashes. It transitioned so beautifully - I don't know how you do it.

Lovelovelove this, all over. :)
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