Reviews for Beautiful, Broken
ppinecone chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I love your writing, and of course this slashy goodness. Broken Jasper and arty Edward are lovely together.
CarminMoon chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I was completely enthralled with this. I wanted to be able to smell the rust and decay. It was amazing.

A broken Jasper always needs love.
cvds chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Loved it. So well written.
Heidi34 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I absolutely LOVE this. I was so absorbed in it that my daughter had to call me three times to get my attention. If more people could see beauty as Edward does, then...

Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful words.
robownsme chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
You do such an amazing job here of helping us feel Jasper's pain. He is so lost and broken, and you've given him the perfect Edward to help him get better. This is the kind of angst I enjoy: angst with hope. Thank you for this.
jacril chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
My 2nd grade teacher taught us to spell "arithmetic" by using the sentence "A rat in Tom's house might eat Tom's ice cream". I swear you could take that sentence, re-write it, and it would be beautiful and I would cry.
cabr chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
What a lovely piece. The rythm of it felt almost like reading poetry. And I would love to see this Edward! I also loved how raw Jasper's emotions were. Thanks!
insanemum chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Really lovely. Aching, sweet and lovely. Your description of Jasper's ruined body was amazing. The whole story was beautifully done.
CrystalMichelle chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
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SolaScriptura chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Beautiful. Amazing as always.
Navygirl14 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
This was wonderful..I loved it...They are beautiful together no matter what the outward appearance may be...
Merina Green chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
That was a beautiful story.
rmhale chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
That was amazing and beautiful...

as I sit here wiping my eyes...

You are truly talented...
Ella Whitlock chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Damn, that was amazing. Brought me to tears. Well done.
clairdeluneisgreat chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
beautiful story. thank you so much for sharing.
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