Fabulous story!

This is lovely! You've captured Sherlock and John's interactions very well. Thanks for writing!
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Sophia the Scribe

Wow. That was great! I love how deeply you delved into John's subconscious in order to bring the main problems to the fore. I love how determined and eager Sherlock was to rid his new friend of his evils. And I of course loved their timeless friendship.

This is so convincing and documentary! It's like reading a meta!

Fantastic! I'd give this two faves if would let me! Super story!

I enjoy your stories very much. I hope you've continued to write and that I can find you somewhere. Thank you.

Thank you for this. I thoroughly enjoyed every word of it.

I love your writing style. This fic made me smile.

There's just one thing that could use some explaining. In your Sherlock universe, Sherlock's been living at 221B Baker Street for some time, but in the series premiere, there are boxes of stuff scattered all over the living room that are waiting to be upacked. Would someone who's been living in a particular place for some time have a number of possessions still unpacked? Sometime, you might want to write a gapfiller explaining that, I'm thinking-if you're ever going to write Sherlock fanfiction again, that is.

I just love this story! I love the idea about Sherlock caring for John and trying to help him from the outset; at least, there is some evidence of that idea in the first episode, when Sherlock as good as admits that he forced John to run in order to cure his psychosomatic limp. I know it's been some time since you've last written a BBC Sherlock story, but I really hope that you'll write some more sometime.

Here's a plot bunny, if you ever decide to use it. How about a gapfiller based on the last scene of this chapter, in which Sherlock and John go to the rehabilitation center to pick up John's things after they have eaten? (In other stories, John's first home, before he becomes Sherlock's flatmate, is described as a bedsit; I'm assuming that in your Sherlock universe, the rehabilitation center has its own bedsits for its discharged soldiers.) Maybe you could describe what's going through Sherlock's mind as he's looking around the bedsit while John is gathering his things. What do you think? Would you be interested?

Very well thought out explanations. I loved all the behind-the-scenes conversations that were happening. It certaintly adds more depth to all the characters.

I really enjoyed your story, it's great to see Sherlock care about John. And its plausible that he would be able to cure everything about John Thanks for sharing!

Loved this. well done :) I love how you write Sherlock and John. They're so in character! Good job.

this was great! thanks for writing!

The last paragraph threw me...your timeline is tight so far but John hasn't met mycroft or killed the cabbie yet. Spent the next few paragrapgh being bothered about it so I came back to review. Other than that the story flows really well. Thank you for writing it!