|Reviews for The Consequences of Caring|
| Obscured Angel chapter 5 . 2/8/2014
Thank you so much for writing and posting this story. It's appreciated.
| AmazingGrace36 chapter 5 . 1/27/2014
I thoroughly enjoy reading your work and love the stories that you bring to life.
Just one small comment: You go back and forth between saying Watson or Holmes and John or Sherlock. I find the inconsistency rather bothersome, and I personally find it near impossible to address either character by their last name. They've always been John and Sherlock in the series, and that's how I've always thought of them.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/5/2014
You really really need to work on your grammar, especially checking to make sure you have commas in the right places. You have a lot of run ons.
transitions are another issue.
This is a remarkable story and I Absolutely loved reading it.
| librarywitch chapter 5 . 12/17/2013
Sherlock would so approach this problem exactly this way. So well done and perfect.
| 64teeth chapter 5 . 11/19/2013
amazing story :)
| Xin0Lan chapter 5 . 9/15/2013
I love this one! Quite intriguing delving into the life of John. Sherlock does care for him.
| PBIceCream chapter 5 . 9/14/2013
I absolutely adore these two! That was a truly wonderful series, thank you.
| Louey06 chapter 5 . 7/6/2013
What a great story. i love how Sherlock did everything so slyly. trying to save joh withut John knowing he was being saved. I also liked how confused he was on things like how t comfprt someone after a nightmare. This was a great story, it rally showed the connection that John and Sherlock share. well done!
| WL Chastain chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
Great story! Wonderful character integrity! Brilliant!
| Grac3 chapter 5 . 6/4/2013
I really enjoyed this story. They were incredibly in character and I love how Sherlock was trying to keep all of it secret from John so he didn't go off on one.
| Brightpath2 chapter 5 . 6/1/2013
The one time he forgets the milk lol .
splendid work 3
| 302pilot chapter 5 . 5/3/2013
Wow. What an incredible read! Perfect characterization-their voices were spot on. The way Sherlock attacked the problem of the nightmares was so in character-your description of his deductions was brilliant writing. And the final revelation was heart breaking but oh so plausible. That's exactly what John would think; that's exactly what would cause his nightmares. Absolutely one of the best, well written fics I've had the pleasure of reading- thank you so very much!
| toeki chapter 5 . 4/16/2013
very good story, in character, touching. and not slash, which is a pleasant change rearding that 90 percent of the sherlock stories on this site are slash.
i saw some typos while reading, for example you always write "murder" instead of "murderer". but it is still very readable.
| theywontletmedeletethisaccount chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
| Sky-Angel14 chapter 5 . 4/5/2013