Thank you so much for writing and posting this story. It's appreciated.

I thoroughly enjoy reading your work and love the stories that you bring to life.

Just one small comment: You go back and forth between saying Watson or Holmes and John or Sherlock. I find the inconsistency rather bothersome, and I personally find it near impossible to address either character by their last name. They've always been John and Sherlock in the series, and that's how I've always thought of them.

You really really need to work on your grammar, especially checking to make sure you have commas in the right places. You have a lot of run ons.

transitions are another issue.

This is a remarkable story and I Absolutely loved reading it.

Sherlock would so approach this problem exactly this way. So well done and perfect.

amazing story :)

I love this one! Quite intriguing delving into the life of John. Sherlock does care for him.

I absolutely adore these two! That was a truly wonderful series, thank you.

What a great story. i love how Sherlock did everything so slyly. trying to save joh withut John knowing he was being saved. I also liked how confused he was on things like how t comfprt someone after a nightmare. This was a great story, it rally showed the connection that John and Sherlock share. well done!

Great story! Wonderful character integrity! Brilliant!

I really enjoyed this story. They were incredibly in character and I love how Sherlock was trying to keep all of it secret from John so he didn't go off on one.

The one time he forgets the milk lol .
splendid work 3

Wow. What an incredible read! Perfect characterization-their voices were spot on. The way Sherlock attacked the problem of the nightmares was so in character-your description of his deductions was brilliant writing. And the final revelation was heart breaking but oh so plausible. That's exactly what John would think; that's exactly what would cause his nightmares. Absolutely one of the best, well written fics I've had the pleasure of reading- thank you so very much!
Cheers
CB

very good story, in character, touching. and not slash, which is a pleasant change rearding that 90 percent of the sherlock stories on this site are slash.
i saw some typos while reading, for example you always write "murder" instead of "murderer". but it is still very readable.

perfect

Awesome story!