Reviews for The Consequences of Caring |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for writing and posting this story. It's appreciated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thoroughly enjoy reading your work and love the stories that you bring to life. Just one small comment: You go back and forth between saying Watson or Holmes and John or Sherlock. I find the inconsistency rather bothersome, and I personally find it near impossible to address either character by their last name. They've always been John and Sherlock in the series, and that's how I've always thought of them. |
![]() ![]() You really really need to work on your grammar, especially checking to make sure you have commas in the right places. You have a lot of run ons. transitions are another issue. This is a remarkable story and I Absolutely loved reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sherlock would so approach this problem exactly this way. So well done and perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this one! Quite intriguing delving into the life of John. Sherlock does care for him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore these two! That was a truly wonderful series, thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story. i love how Sherlock did everything so slyly. trying to save joh withut John knowing he was being saved. I also liked how confused he was on things like how t comfprt someone after a nightmare. This was a great story, it rally showed the connection that John and Sherlock share. well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Wonderful character integrity! Brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story. They were incredibly in character and I love how Sherlock was trying to keep all of it secret from John so he didn't go off on one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The one time he forgets the milk lol . splendid work 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. What an incredible read! Perfect characterization-their voices were spot on. The way Sherlock attacked the problem of the nightmares was so in character-your description of his deductions was brilliant writing. And the final revelation was heart breaking but oh so plausible. That's exactly what John would think; that's exactly what would cause his nightmares. Absolutely one of the best, well written fics I've had the pleasure of reading- thank you so very much! Cheers CB |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good story, in character, touching. and not slash, which is a pleasant change rearding that 90 percent of the sherlock stories on this site are slash. i saw some typos while reading, for example you always write "murder" instead of "murderer". but it is still very readable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! |