Reviews for New Ending
Vampirequeen05 chapter 4 . 5/6
Really good plot although I didn’t like Bella being referred to as ‘mum’ they are like 100 years her senior and they call her ‘mum’. Also felt like those bonds sprung out of nowhere. You need to revise your spelling and grammar and add to the story so it doesn’t seem so rushed and forced.
B4bidden chapter 4 . 2/3
wish there was more
willowtree666 chapter 4 . 1/3
plz make more I like it all ready
andjelija.nenic chapter 3 . 8/17/2017
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
Guest chapter 4 . 7/21/2017
Please write!
It kills me to see a story unfinished!
katepanis1389 chapter 4 . 7/9/2017
please update
Rainha do Nilo chapter 4 . 5/6/2017
Hello, I'm a Brazilian Girl and I love your fic.
Please, Continue your story.
Kisses, bye.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/28/2017
Update fast please this story so far is amazing and i love it thank you
tammyleeroberts chapter 4 . 7/8/2016
Please update soon i really love this story i hope you finish this story
Jessica Love1 chapter 4 . 5/8/2016
Please update this Awesome story real soon.
I really love how Bella is acting as Queen.
What do the three kings plan to do to Bella?
How will the kings handle Rose, Emmett, and Jasper as Bella's children?
Will they have special bonds with the kings?
Please update soon.
Thanks for listening!
B4bidden chapter 4 . 3/30/2016
really wish there was more to read please continue this story
tentenlangdon chapter 4 . 3/19/2016
Loved it can't wait for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/18/2016
Keep going!
fouillet.camille.cf chapter 4 . 2/1/2016
j'adore est ce quil aura bientot la suite
clo78 chapter 4 . 6/22/2015
hope you'll update soon
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