|Reviews for The Hyperbeam of Union|
| Pokeshipping Fun2020 chapter 7 . 10/24/2019
Awww nice chapter see u later friend...
| Pokeshipping Fun2020 chapter 6 . 10/23/2019
Awwww nice chapter see ya.
| Pokeshipping Fun2020 chapter 5 . 10/22/2019
Nice chapter see you later friend.
| Pokeshipping Fun2020 chapter 4 . 10/22/2019
Awww nice chapter.
| Pokeshipping Fun2020 chapter 2 . 10/21/2019
Wow nice chapter see you later friend.
| Pokeshipping Fun2020 chapter 1 . 10/21/2019
Wow nice chapter.
| midnightscar17 chapter 7 . 1/18/2015
Continue please its soooo good
| Just Wondering chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
If you made a sequel, make it a story maybe on becca or mikeys travels, or another set of chapters continuing the story with lilynette included
| so just wonderin chapter 7 . 11/17/2014
can you please make a sequel or something like dat
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/9/2014
| dloold87 chapter 7 . 8/14/2014
omg this whole story was entertaining, I don't think I have laughed that much with a story for awhile, I loved the party scene with Jesse and James lol.
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/23/2014
This might be the best story I read in a long while! Thank you for writing such a good story!
| Jus Sum Dude chapter 7 . 3/18/2014
Aside from the more "vivid" parts, it's just boring.
There's no antagonist, no problem, no tension. If there weren't any sex scenes there would be no reason to read beyond the first chapter.
| mark chapter 7 . 12/23/2013
That was a great story! Very touching and heart felt.
| joey baldwin chapter 7 . 11/22/2013
that was good can u make more chapters plese contunie with the story