Reviews for The Hyperbeam of Union
midnightscar17 chapter 7 . 1/18
Continue please its soooo good
Just Wondering chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
If you made a sequel, make it a story maybe on becca or mikeys travels, or another set of chapters continuing the story with lilynette included
so just wonderin chapter 7 . 11/17/2014
can you please make a sequel or something like dat
Guest chapter 7 . 10/9/2014
Sweet story!
dloold87 chapter 7 . 8/14/2014
omg this whole story was entertaining, I don't think I have laughed that much with a story for awhile, I loved the party scene with Jesse and James lol.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/23/2014
This might be the best story I read in a long while! Thank you for writing such a good story!
Jus Sum Dude chapter 7 . 3/18/2014
Aside from the more "vivid" parts, it's just boring.

There's no antagonist, no problem, no tension. If there weren't any sex scenes there would be no reason to read beyond the first chapter.
mark chapter 7 . 12/23/2013
That was a great story! Very touching and heart felt.
joey baldwin chapter 7 . 11/22/2013
that was good can u make more chapters plese contunie with the story
ripitupgenki chapter 7 . 10/23/2013
excellent story! loved the whole thing!
MidnightHunter563 chapter 7 . 6/24/2013
this was a very good story. i wounder if you'll ever make another one.
Ginsan1122 chapter 7 . 6/1/2013
PERFECT
RyoshiMorino chapter 7 . 5/31/2013
Excellent! What a way to end it all!
serenityselena chapter 7 . 5/31/2013
a really interesting and entertaining epilogue :)
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 7 . 5/30/2013
An excellent ending for this story!
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